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MaRVJay1009 | 2 | 28.57% | |
Black Queen | 5 | 71.43% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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01-15-05, 01:57 PM | #16 | |
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
IP: A0C8 44A9
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01-15-05, 02:09 PM | #17 | |
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
i am not very fond of MarvJay-if he lost i wouldn't vote, it would be considered a hate vote, but anywayz. Marv took this battle because he had punches and personals throughout.. Black Queen you have good content however you can say any of your verse besides the first bar to someone.. you metas were str8 but Marv took this one.. you have to get personal and uses them with ya punches.. and make it creative.. with that said i.. v/ MarvJay1009
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01-15-05, 02:11 PM | #18 | |
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
i fucked up with the second line of explanation... any part of your verse could be used against ANYONE.. which was almost considered filler lines.. <<that's what i meant... (sowwi if i confused)
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01-15-05, 02:34 PM | #19 | |
Metropolis
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IP: B52C 6258
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
pretty good battle but ima have to give it to MJ since he edged it out with better punches. both had ight structure and multies. but i just like MJ's punches a little better, there were more creative n flowed well. holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171637 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=171624 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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01-15-05, 05:53 PM | #20 | |
Graphically Gifted
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IP: 797E BEFD
Voted For: Black Queen
MaRVJay1009- ima exspose ya wait dis hoe's a fake just check da bar's!.... 2 get "rid of black queen" i aint gota "throw away a deck of cards" 6/10 dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club" 7/10 she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak..... believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week" 6.5/10 yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly. look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me" u oughta write flows..cuzz mj yeah i slaughter trife hoe's!.... nice? u even saught a..in rap u'll "neva c me" im saught of like "strobe" 7/10 overall- 7/10 Black Queen- He lacks new flows , so Imma clown on jay’s rhymin’ disadvantage cause he’s known to re-use ‘more lines’ than coke recyclin’ addicts 8/10 This herb is useless..he isnt postin first he wants the worst abusements Ya not original..the way ya been feedin off writtens like nervous students 7.5/10 Cuz you gotta ram ya fists through God to get ya punches 'a-cross' U always admired me, ever since u came here u wack hoe 8/10 But since u dont go out, i never worried bout u always in my shadows Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips & u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with 9/10 overall-8.5/10 Vote- Black Queen Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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01-17-05, 10:58 AM | #21 |
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IP: 3240 794D
dis is bullshit does vote was good vote fuck u strobe
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01-17-05, 10:06 PM | #22 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin 4 some explained votes and no fukkin hatin
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01-17-05, 10:11 PM | #23 |
QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
IP: 0825 899A
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01-17-05, 10:13 PM | #24 | |
Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 58B5 0751
I see some bias going on up in her on some of this battle my vote was self explainatory.
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01-17-05, 10:34 PM | #25 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 28AD 5545
shut up why every fukkin where black queen ya stupid ass is there
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01-17-05, 11:06 PM | #26 | |
Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 58B5 0751
dah dah dah dah do'nt be a sore bitch for ur anal blister may pop ho! iam threw with u peace
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01-18-05, 12:19 PM | #27 |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
Voted For: Black Queen
this was a coo battle. stupid name marvjay got...lol...but i think she took this one,. she came more prepared and her punches were harder. she had better mettas in here verse too, thats why i had to give her tha vote. this was a decent battle tho...marv, dumb name...lol...but u came wit it, u had some nice punches and some good creativitie in tha most part of ur flow. but some of ur barz were stretched and played a lil. tha deck of cards line was nice, but yo follow up was kinda wack. i was enjoyin this battle, but BQ came out on top to me...i dunno, her verse was just more interesting.... 1 |
01-20-05, 11:17 AM | #28 | |
Ms. Get Gully
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
IP: C9F3 CF94
LMFAO
@she 15 n luv da suck dick ya'll dis childs a freak..... believe i'll damage ya u like a "d-block calender" ya "style(s) is week" yung boys be gas her like black cum a make ya hair grow properly. look at "sig" she said 1nce i start suckin dick "deres no stopin me" dis chick lyin rv she neva b...handlin drugs..start panacin cuzz u scary hoe dat get "shook" more than a "celebirty hand in da club" Nice lines..never seen marv's verses before..nice tho Sad...u da only one who can never have played name flips & u knew u were gon’ be served, shit a plate is what you came with ^best line she had......im not voting ..posting feedback cuz i know the chick would say im a hate vote ... but she loss... easy to see |
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01-20-05, 11:26 AM | #29 |
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IP: 28AD 5545
^^^^rofl everywhere i go u rite on my ass give my some fuckin breathin space
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01-20-05, 11:30 AM | #30 | |
Ms. Get Gully
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IP: C9F3 CF94
....silence smutt link..Go answer the call out .i know u see it
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