vote poetic
better punches and multis
both could work on vocab and personals a lil

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willl where's the vote?? uppin for 3 more votes to ko this kat

I liked Gam's structure an punches more, no disrspect

vote = gam

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upp some shit....get some more votes on this piece...

muh vote goes to tha nigga Gam

pretty clean line:
so stop the COMMOTION this bitch should just stop fuckin' POSTIN'//
he's been beat so many times he should start to carry around LOTION//

Best line in battle:
I carry EIGHT-LAZERS, ROASTIN-FOLKS, you KNOW-YOU'RE-TOAST/
Have your body parts 'stuck all over the board' like POST-IT-NOTES!/

nice one:
and yeah he is a pussy! and he sucks so he's always SITTIN' on his KNEES//
but like jessica simpson the question is, is it fish or is it CHICKEN of the SEA//

but still, it goes to Gam

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Lyrical Crook

BEST-IN-JEST, even if I jot my 'notes high' like TREBLE-CLEFS/
i know i asked u to clarify this line,but i wasnt feelin it
And my 'talk shows skills' like murdering OPRAH-WINFREY (talk shows kills
i know what u was tryna say,but...i think it was weak wordplay
So I'll put 'metal to your chest' like a fuckin PACEMAKER/
i liked this
Have your body parts 'stuck all over the board' like POST-IT-NOTES!/
i liked this too
I'm the BEST-EMCEE, and 'you ain't fuckin with it' like VASECTOMIES!/
i know i've seen this before
And Gambino's like Phone Sex... kid, you'll 'NEVER-CUM-CLOSE-TO-ME'
i liked this
Fight me? Kid I'm the 'best in the ring' like a PERFECT-MARRIAGE! (think)/
this isnt really a good meta...i get it,but...
Coz your rhymes ain't makin sense like having VIRGIN-PARENTS/
nice line


but..most of ur punches i've seen before,at least the concept
n i think u were tryna emphasize ur multies wayyyy too much
ur flow was fell off a lot,n u shouldnt use all those dashes

gambino

cause you couldn' beat me if I was peewee herman and you was my RIGHT HAND//


he's been beat so many times he should start to carry around LOTION//
these are prolly ur best punches,but the concept is played
and here's some advice....u should't put 2 lines with the same content side by side at least spread it out
n that chicken of the sea line...BOOOOOOOO


aight,i mean,gambino tried to be more original...but those lines sucked..he had better flow,but no multies...poetic had better punches,but concepts were played on most of them,n multies were forced n the flow fell off here n there,but over all it was better


so vote=poetic

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uppin for one more vote.....bitch

im givin u that last vote fam, this battle wasnt even close all gambino had was punches poetic had better flow multies, but i do agree w/ the chic u kinda did over use them but it still raised yo flow over this cat battle over vote poetic

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