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Old 07-27-04, 05:22 PM   #1
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Originally Posted by I_Daughter_Hoz
^if i was it would have said african diss.
Not really understanding the structure is off thing when i read half of you peoples stuff its basically the same except the fact i use more multies then some of you . someone who said my structure is off explain it to me a lil more...thanx for feed backs n i'll drop some feed backs on yall posts



NAW BUT YOU SAID MY NAME IN YO SHIT...I SHALL FURTHER BREAK DOWN YO SHIT AN SEE WHATS UP WITH YO LIL DISS TO HER..
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Old 07-27-04, 03:41 PM   #2
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not a bad diss had some decent vocab some creative lines some good diss and all around i enjoyed the read nicely done..

can u give some feed back on my diss to forgotten flow pt2...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137793
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Old 07-27-04, 05:35 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by I_Daughter_Hoz
im' sonning a butch bitch. manly ass latino kitten



Troublesome flows shown to choke n crumble a bundle of ho's
only the humble should know who's prone to get thrown when fucking wit pros
you ducking it tho,
..JUST SHIT TALKING...GOOD MULTIEZ..NOTHING PUNCHED

ya fears obviously spilled but u still receieve serious beatings
Curiousity Kills this Kat dead,sure u leave blood splat n threads but thats When ya periods Leaking
..MORE SHIT TALKING...AN GOOD MULTIEZ AGAIN...LAST LINE WAS FUNNY BUT PLAYED AS HELL

excuse me for speaking but this is quiet awful tho, Quick question bitch...who's that manly voice in ya Audios?
i apologize yo,didnt realize you fly solo when it comes to whack limits
attack bitches like you, and to mention ya pix? its sad when AFRICAN kids even diss it!
FIRST LINE AINT NOTHING..SECOND LINE SHIT TALKING..AN I DONT LIKE HOW YOU USED MY NAME..NOT EVEN A PUNCH SINCE I WAS A MODEL AN A GOOD JUDGE ON LOOKS...WOULD BE DIFFRENT IF I WAS UGLY..BUT BLAH





damn..cant even get a Nig to collab wit you, im laughin too hard to even be mad rude
cause ya "man" see'n U undressed is only when he's slapping the keys and askin for nudes
..DIDINT LIKE THIS BAR..BLAH...SLOWING DOWN ON THE MULTIEZ

Thats nasty tho *whew*u were born a Man, but it pays to be a Woman..just look at her scarred Tits
whats worse is see'n her twat that resembles a confused gorilla with crusty parched lips

...MORE SHIT TALKING...BUT ITS HURTING HER UNLESS SHES MADE OF STONE..LOL

Trust it hurts to see ya dick riders give me props and go crazy
u wont phaze me with ya Dead weight delivery as if u were given birth to still born babies
..DOPE SECOND LINE..

its rational that you practice ya flows i get a blasmphemous laugh at this folks,
cause when i attack this faggot bitch i leave holes more open than her dysfunctional nose
..YU WERE WORRIED TOO MUCH BOUT MULTIES MAKING SHIT SHIT SOUND CORNY

im punchin thru posts i'll get a psychiatrist for you to cope and except this
and the way niggas sleep on ya lines is like geeks thats narcaleptic!

..OLD PLAYED LINES...


SHIT WAS A DISS NO DOUBT..NOTHING HARDLY HIT...JUST FLOWED AN MULTIEZ....LIKE MORE TO HURT HER EGO AN MAKE HER CRY THEN TRYING TO BEAT HER CAUSE YOU SAID SOME WACK SHIT ONLY TO HURT HER FEELINGS IT SEEMS...

PUNCHES = 2/10
FLOW=4/10
STRUCTURE=2/10
MLTIEZ=7/10
VOCAB=4/10
ENJOYMENT=3/10
OVERALL=5/10


SHIT WAS DECENT...WAS A DISS BUT IF SHES ANY GOOD SHE COULD SHIT ON THIS..I AINT SEEN NONE OF HER SHIT SO I DUNNO...
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Old 07-28-04, 10:24 AM   #4
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^if it was a diss to you u would know it.....i used your NAME AFRICAN....its not like i said african is an african kid i dont know who u are or what you are for that matter...so i used your name and your qoute. problem?
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Me N her battle is n my sig. click the first link
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Old 07-29-04, 10:21 AM   #5
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upppz
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Old 07-29-04, 10:54 AM   #6
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Dat's a nice come bac. keep doin tha damn thing ma
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Old 07-30-04, 10:35 AM   #7
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wordz thanx ya.
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Old 08-01-04, 11:16 AM   #8
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2 badd ya got murked in da battle
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Old 08-01-04, 11:23 AM   #9
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she tryed though but this drop was good.
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Old 08-01-04, 08:51 PM   #10
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nice drop too bad you got merked.
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Old 08-03-04, 12:25 AM   #11
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structure was goood, nice diss but why in open micy you always bring the beef with both yall man yall juss stop its fucking annoying

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Old 08-06-04, 09:18 PM   #12
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It was str-8 man nice disses need to work on structure and u will be start i need to post me some shit up
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