Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

whoa whoa whoa..
i liked your verse alot..
good multies example:
Shyt, todays friday n another test for division....
If I only listend, 10 credits i wouldn't be missin...
Speakin of listen'n, wit mah friends i shoulda ditched.
nice job....with multies..
structure
your whole first three-fourths of ur verse nice..last was falling off
good flow
good rhymes..
i also like how ur no forcing ur rhymes..proud of u dawg
example: precentage ..regret it
and threw in a funny ender 8.0

decree wun

your verse was also hott
nice drop..he had better strcuture and flow..u had stretched lines
and i wasnt feelin ur ending at all..nicejob though 7.7/10

barely one that battle..but he did win..propz to all..

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Voted For: Decree Wun

dcree ones because he had better vocab and his was more descpriptive and it was better in terms of story so return the favor nucca

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uppin this battle............................................ ...........

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Voted For: Decree Wun

lol...

ingenous mind... on this topic, i really wasent feeling the way u slanted it.. it was to serious for no reason.. a topic liek this you need to have fun with.. you did ok rhyming and everything, ut the way u went with it, for this topic was boring...

decree... i felt like you went in the direction i would have.. good job.. it was more of a read and laff type thing.. i have had things liek that happen before -_-... was tellin my boy how my history teacher had a fat ass, and she was standing behind me in the lunch line lmao .. yea she pulled me aside and told me she was flattered, but thats not what i need to be thinking about in her class.. OMG...shes hot... ne way.. i was feeling your drop and imegery a lil better in this.. good job to both of you tho

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Voted For: Decree Wun


Good topicals y'all

Decree......Goood story, its was entertaining, imagery was tight and flow was on point throughout, you had nicely place multies not too many and none were forced, structure was on point, you never vered off topic and you took the topic outside the normal math struggles but still stayed with the original subject very nicely written piece

Grade: B

Ingenious.........also a decent story your flow was good, structure was good but your story was weak it was blan and didn't surprise you did the basic math struggles story, you gotta be more creative, but your multies was good, vocab coulda been alil stronger but overall you were pretty much even in all categories except for the storyline, but it was very close match decree jus edged it by a little

Grade: B-

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wtf??? isn't triple N in ur crew???wtf???

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no dumbass hes not...im in hardwood class-sickz go to my crew and look at da damn roster..

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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

yo, this was a nice battle. But I think mind got it.

DW, you had nice imagery and stuff. But I think you could have put a little more into it. There wasn't enought, but what was there was good. Aiight job on that though. Yo flow was pretty good too. I liked it. It was good thoruhgout whole verse. Jus went off in a few parts.overall tight verse.

Ingenious, you had a nice verse. I was feelin' it. YOu had some nice imagery there, wit some nice lines and stuff. Good job on that. Yo flow was also very nice on this. IT sytayed constant throughtout the whole verse. Tight job.

V/Ingenious no hate

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man im such a newbie here hoping to get better
everytime i spit sum rhymes i feel im being a winner
even though sum say mah rhymes are weak
i know reading it is funner than to take a leak

Voted For: Decree Wun

yo i think u won this battle but barely i liked ur approach to tha topic it was different and caught me eye ingenous mind your drop was nice too but whered tha jessica simpson line come from it threw me off a lil bit Decree had a better opener and closer i felt ingenous's structure more tho but all in all this was a well fought battle but Decree Wun gets my vote

vote-Decree Wun

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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..

engenious mind cuz you had betta stucture and rhymes and punches decree wun you had no punches and structure you need to elevate

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Voted For: Decree Wun

DAMN this was a hot battle. Both of you have mad skills on the topical shit, but I'ma give this one to Decree. His verse sounded more like it's what he's thinkin' at the moment, and Ingenius yours was about like events currently and in the past. And you kinda lost me near thened with that Jessica Simpson line. But no hate, good job on both your parts.
Vote - Decree Wun

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