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untouchablekilla 5 62.50%
Trojan 3 37.50%
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Old 09-13-04, 10:34 PM   #1
WhiTe_Tee
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checkin turban and louis's dickriding noobie ass... checkin stats
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Old 09-13-04, 10:39 PM   #2
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Voted For: Trojan

Aight, Aight...

I Think Trojan Got This...

Some Decent Wordplay n Aight Metas, Neither Really Hit Any Hard Punches, Structure Couldda Been Better Trojan But On The Whole Ya Wordplay n Metas Got My Vote..

Killa, Ya Flow Was Aight...
my style has readers eager to read avoid the drawnout suspense…/
your weak structure promotes little change like a DNA sequence
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Loved That Bar, But Ya Flow Kinda Lacked A ''Killa'' Fnisher, An Ya Opener Is Kinda Played Out, I Seen Too Many People Try n Rhyme With The Word ''Text''...But Still An Aight Drop Tho, Keep Em Comin..

No Hate n Return The Favor

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Old 09-13-04, 11:05 PM   #3
untouchablekilla
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isnt it weird that you voted against me and white_tee in both are battles ur blacklisted herb k thx
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Old 09-13-04, 11:21 PM   #4
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I can't vote on this, so I'm just seeing who did...
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Old 09-13-04, 11:22 PM   #5
untouchablekilla
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dick riders thats who
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Old 09-14-04, 12:09 AM   #6
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checkin polls
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Old 09-14-04, 09:41 AM   #7
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uppin this shit yall.............................................. .....
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Old 09-14-04, 07:31 PM   #8
untouchablekilla
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uppin
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Old 09-14-04, 11:43 PM   #9
untouchablekilla
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uppin damnit!
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Old 09-15-04, 04:06 PM   #10
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uppin this yalll.......................................
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Old 09-15-04, 07:54 PM   #11
untouchablekilla
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omg stop sleeping plz
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Old 09-15-04, 08:01 PM   #12
CaliCollegeGurl
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Wow, rapverse has changed since the summer. Anyhow, so you need to watch out for your spelling only because since this is over a computer when we read it it messes up the flow. This line we ill: The only way you could match my skill is when you literaly copy me. Those enterior rhymes gave you a nice edge: will, still, skill..."punch's will leave u short on breath like midget's on asma" very nice!
I liked what I read, I hold you to high standards as a vet. Overall structure was on lock, punches were pretty good. Not too much played verse (although this you could have done without "my lines shine, rhyme after rhyme to go and blind your eyes") 8/10
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Old 09-15-04, 11:32 PM   #13
untouchablekilla
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uhh omg uppin
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Old 09-16-04, 06:24 PM   #14
untouchablekilla
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uppin omg stop sleeping
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Old 09-16-04, 06:42 PM   #15
BIGPAPPA76
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Voted For: Trojan

aight i like this verse a lot better, better wordplay and structure.. i liked that you explained some of your punches and personals... you had a lot more metas and personals... no hate tho to killa, you came hard and did your thing to... this was a pretty close battle but i gotta go with trojan on this one and thats just an honest vote... he came harder with punches and personals and thats what wins battles...

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