POtentially Phatt!!! good phrazing I thought it coulda used a stronger core but i liked the old skool vibe it had to it 8/10 keep droppin!!!!!

thnx for the feed.
upping for more please.

ok, lmao,,@: your verse was great, nice flow and good vocabulary, was feeling it...
I.M.:lol, girl, what? you know we cool, but yo, like you said,this didnt make much sense, but i know what you were trying to do, the only thing that bugged me was your verses didnt match up...but good job both...keep it up..1

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thnx for the feed.
we sorte4d and worte this in 10 minute's so that explain's why they are not on the same topic.The whole thing doesnt really have a topic. We just got talking bout keystyle's then thought we might aswell drop a quick collab.
but thnx for all feed.
upping for more^^^
pz

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Nice collab, dope for the time frame, structure was kinna off, prolly coulda done with not bein so large, woulda been easier t read, but was pretty dope, some good words spoken from you both.

Well Done

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thnx for the feed.

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