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Old 11-24-04, 12:11 AM   #1
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Old 11-24-04, 02:12 AM   #2
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well, as usual, all the battles that i think are good have been involving my crew members so i'm unable to vote...

i liked both drops... I.Mind, the only thing i would say you needed to do better was look at how you worded some of your stuff... you were on point with ya topic the whole way through and your examples were definitely truth

Verbal Abuse (you still hate me don't you?...lol) good drop... the prayer at the beginning added a good touch to your piece... with that said, you also did the complete opposite of I.mind... i thought you concentrated too much on the convo between G-d and Jacob S. and not enough on the actual commandments... the last line eluded to it but there's more to be said... if ya drop was longer i'm sure ya woulda nailed the other nine...

pretty even... i'll let someone else decides who won
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Old 11-29-04, 08:44 PM   #3
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man, someone vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 12-01-04, 02:07 PM   #4
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freaken read it..........
freaken read it..........
 
Old 12-02-04, 10:11 AM   #5
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Voted For: Dabatos

I think that ..::InGeNiUs MiNd::.. got this battle because i feel that ..::InGeNiUs MiNd::.. came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt ..::InGeNiUs MiNd::.. got it was effective and was on point VA u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to ..::InGeNiUs MiNd::.. good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to ..::InGeNiUs MiNd::.. and flow and structure i'll give to ..::InGeNiUs MiNd::...

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Old 12-02-04, 08:49 PM   #6
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thanx uppin
thanx uppin
thanx uppin
thanx uppin
 
Old 12-02-04, 10:08 PM   #7
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this was close but ingenius mind wins this because i liked the style that was used on the verse and it went better with the topic.both came complex and had good vocab and all and i think verbal abuse had an interesting peice but i felt that instead of talking about 1 commandment,it should have been at least most of them,which is what minds did.....close one keep it up ya'll....but heres my vote
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Old 12-02-04, 10:54 PM   #8
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You did good prolly not your best but good keep it up n shyt.............................................. .................................................. .............
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Old 12-04-04, 11:41 PM   #9
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Verbal abuse:
hmm not bad was feelin your verse just felt you didnt come as hard in the emotion or vocabulary as I Mind did...if you would of upped your vocabulary you would of had this...but not by far....i like how you both stayed on topic to but Verbal work on vocabulary...well you also had a great stucture to your verse as well and it flowed well to...good verse 8.2/10

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hmm good emotion came pretty tight in the 2nd verse with the vocabulary and the multis hit hard...stucture was there i couldent say this was your best but its almost there....pretty dicent peices from both of you..i just feel I Mind had better vocab and emotion to hers...8.4/10
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Old 12-07-04, 09:37 PM   #10
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Old 12-11-04, 10:08 PM   #11
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uppin.............................................
 
Old 12-12-04, 11:49 AM   #12
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not bad not bad.

mood: i
getting deep: i
flow both
style both
stayed on topic: i
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