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Old 11-28-04, 10:34 AM   #1
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i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point


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Old 11-28-04, 11:55 AM   #2
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thats a mutha fukken hott piece u played that shyt out man keep em comin i cant fiund shyt wrong with it so w/e man call an agent or suttin u dunno hit me up tho im new so lemme know whats good http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583
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i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point


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KO'S
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Terror 2005
Wreckk

KINGDIPSET-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
WRECKK
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

Reppinn...................Retro-Bution.................
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Old 11-22-04, 05:47 PM   #3
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damnit nigga..you beat my open mic..I admit it..

Bla..I'ma make one to beat this...

it was sick man.nothin wrong with it..AT all..damn..

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Old 11-22-04, 05:51 PM   #4
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go look at my "not you" no link sorry
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Old 11-22-04, 06:15 PM   #5
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imagery was great................flow was on point and structure was also damn good........i really like tha vocab and emotion.....i really liked how you stayed on topic.......most cats get off point...........this was a very good drop
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Old 11-22-04, 06:27 PM   #6
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nice drop fam....thats def the Open mic of the month of nov. even though its the first one ive read of this site...it was good...very good..
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Old 11-22-04, 07:40 PM   #7
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This was pretty good. I dunno if its just me, but I sort of got an image in my head of a rich beverly hills type beachside community and a man parked outside in an expensive sports car fuming about losing his ex wife..

It was really good how you started on your topic from a very early part of the peice with this line:

"Constantly parked parallel to entrance of house in question…"

As soon as I read that, I knew exactly what this whole thing was about. And its probably what kept me interested throughout the rest of the peice.

Good shit bro..
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Old 11-22-04, 10:20 PM   #8
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wow, this is unbelievably good, like your imagery man, and yea poet ^, i kinda got the same idea, the imagery wow, that was just great, i swear, if we we're in a topical battle, you would of killed me! lol, but yea, the vocab was excellent, n multi's needed at all, that actually would of ruined it. I'm very impressed, thanx to this O.M., people will show the capability of what our crew can do! ,

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much prop's!! Damn, now i got competition

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Old 11-23-04, 02:34 AM   #9
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lol

thx

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Old 11-23-04, 12:25 PM   #10
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Damn Prem...

Nice Emotion ThroughOut...Good Use of Vocabulary and The Rhyme Scheme Was Nice.

This Is Probably The Best Open Mic I've Read (Well Except For Mine :-D lol)

Tight Shit Man...Keep It Up...

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Old 11-23-04, 12:29 PM   #11
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Lovin it mayne, this is tha most touching poem...*tear* *sniff*, lost myself 4 a minute, ne wayz, good use of imagery!!! Very creative and your last line was 1 of tha best closers I seen on an OM. Keep it up bro, true potential!
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Old 11-23-04, 03:02 PM   #12
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I Was Feeling This Piece...
The Emotion And Content Were All There...
And The Piece Had A Nice Smooth Flow That Alway Stayed Constant...
I Always Said You Would Be Able To Be A Nice Topical Head...
Oviously While I Was Gone You Made The Leap To Do Just That...
Very Nice Piece Overall With Really No Flaws...
Only Thing I Could Complain About Is Its Length...
But It's The Second Half Of Your Other Piece So When Together Its Prolly Right...
Big Up Mayn, I Like What You're Doing...
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Old 11-23-04, 04:42 PM   #13
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GIVE HIM THE OPEN MIC AWARD GODDAMNIT... HE DESERVES IT YOU STINGY BASTARDS.. ROFL well he does.. uppin' this nice piece of work...
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Old 11-24-04, 02:46 PM   #14
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Old 11-24-04, 02:51 PM   #15
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Dope piece one of the better open mics ive read in awhile. Reminds me of a piece i didn in a topical tourney, nice emotion, feeling it..............
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