yea...good lookin on that...another honest vote. makes me happy....uppin this..........

uppin this.............................................. ..............

Uppin ............ This Battle People ..............

uppin this battle again.....too many battles is gettn slept on..........

Voted For: Pyro

J DOT:
decent drop from u, punches were decent & landed, structure was in place, and the flow was good...u had a pretty decent vocab too & decent wp's too...overall u had a good drop...

.Mict.:
you a had a decent drop also...the punches could've hit harder though, becuz mostly your structure fuck'd it up for you, the flow - -u lost me there..the vocab was nice...but overall it was your structure that fuck'd it up for you mayn..
im not sayin to elevate - -but im sayin to is that fix your structure though

NO HATE TO BOTH. . .

RTF J DOT

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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

winner-mictorious

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Illest of Illy?, I’ll murk you for really……
….Light this cat like a philly, yo rhymes played like Willie*
And like him, they say PYRO’s a GIANT**
…Im big as “Rocks” from “Colorado”, so call me Kobe Bryant***
nice simile, pretty good line

Yo,
Im sitting here, thinkin bout what you gon’ do
…I got tha X-Ray…I could see the pussy in you
dis was a funny line, good stuff

The pussy is who? Mictorious. Take ya down real quick
Im victorious in this battle, and in life, ur shit
this was an ok line, not too good

How you want it dawg?...test me? ya get ya card swiped
Credit or debit?....Pyro decline yo life
this was a pretty good line,

Ya gotta soft bite, and ya bark is loud
Lay u off like summer jobs, cause u softer than clouds
pretty good finisher




Its Time For My 'Nicks To Naughty Lizt'!! and not Have To Recognize "Rebellious Kids"...
I Know Your Soul At 'The Back Of Fists'...So I'll Just Slit-Your-Wrists to Leave Ya Life Suffering from "Self Sacrifices"... !!
Hot line, multies were there, and still kept the flow and punch one

Pyro, I Baffle-Kids...So i won like 'Donald Trump' Doin Raffle-Bids
This Mack'll spit and leave ya face 'One-Sided' Like this Battle-Is
like the last one, punch was hard and so were the multis

Put Your 'Barz In The Sky' So You Can Have High Hope's Whenever-I-Read-Ya-Verse, My Barz will Succeed -The-Worst,
Cause Mictorious will 'Translate Ya Actions' Like Close-Captions-In-Theater's
same^^^


One, First-we-Knew-ya-Died, then i'll make ya Heart Burst-till-ya-Fluid-Dried
Cause Mic'll make Pyro Slit ya Own Throat n kill Yoself Worse-then-Suicide
good punch

Ya Gay-Thoughts-Will Never Heat Up or Stay-Coddled
But I'll Decapitate This Bitch While He's Standing and Leave them Looking like Fucking Display-Models
hot dawg

Spay ina Pathetic-incident, And 'pop yer spine' leave ya 'holdin yer back' like 'senior-citizens!'.
Hundred L's Get Sent, Op strap ya 'brain ta rockets' ta really 'raise yer-intelligence!
killer punch

good lookin out on tha votes...i got both ya'll on RTF...dont trip...


uppin this....

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

u won hands down u kill him

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50 characters is alotta bullshit

uppin this folsk...................................

Voted For: Pyro

GOTTA GO WIT DAT NIGGA J-DOT...HIS SHIT WAS SO MUCH BETTA...IT ALL FLOWD TOGETHA...BETTA PUNCHES...N HIS RHYMES WASNT STRECHED...


MICTORIOUS-"Its Time For My 'Nicks To Naughty Lizt'!! and not Have To Recognize "Rebellious Kids"...
I Know Your Soul At 'The Back Of Fists'...So I'll Just Slit-Your-Wrists to Leave Ya Life Suffering from "Self Sacrifices"... !! ".....THAT WHOLE THANG WAS WAY TOO STRECHED...IT WAS KIND OF "FORESHADOWING" FOR YA WHOLE VERSE ONCE I READ DAT COUPLE LINES..




RETURN DA LOVE PLAYA

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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts... StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE

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uppin this shit..........faggotss.....................

Voted For: Pyro

Mictorious:
hmm not bad the stucture was off my far but your punches are decent and some pretty good creativty in there but the reasons why im voteing against you is cuz you just didnt come hard enough J dot made it look like he wanted it more....you need to be more funnier in your rhymes n shit then you probably would of won....but alright peice...no hate

J Dot:
hmm pretty good i thouhgt you came harder and wanted it more you had some good punches and very good creativty damn i liked that alot and your stucture was decent and flowed pretty good....good peice from you....you got this one just by a string...

Opener: J Dot
Closer: Mic
vocab: no one
multis: Mic
stucture: J Dot
flow: J Dot
Punches: J dot
creativty: J dot

WIN/ J Dot