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9th Degree | 5 | 62.50% | |
hotshh! | 3 | 37.50% | |
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02-08-05, 08:18 PM | #16 | ||||
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IP: D5FE 7245
Voted For: 9th Degree
Hotsshh verse Ya rep is weak...Im draining fluids from ya Neck and Cheeks Until ya blood runs dryer..than Periods in their Second Week nice opener U should go find a new habit..... like little kids with Cigarettes Cause 9th Degree 'pulls his punches'..right off of the Internet wasnt really feelin this Could be da Gay Animal Doctor......the way You a Homo Vet But like Peaceful Camera Shy Terrorists You 'Pose No Threat' i liked setup a lot but the punch felt weak U hated on me from da jump...dat I have no Ounce Of Doubt With Soc Dic so far in ya mouth ...it knocked ya Tounsils Out lmao dope So if U 'Driven'.... U get shitted on like Cars with Open Roofs You'll feel this loss 24-7..... Your record will Show the Proof ok... Dis 2 much weight on ya back its bout to Snap Ya Spine in 3 If Knowledge is Power..I guess I just Mastered my 9th Degree .................................................. ..................and im out wasnt feelin this one much 9th Degrees verse Before KORV you were slept on, I still lay on the game 'Cuz you couldn't bring heat if I spotted you a play on my name good opener Truthfully, you used to spit fire, now you'll get doused out Step again, I'll put your shh in a box like an outhouse lol... Now now, I don't mean to get harsh but you want it Yeah, I admit my verse is garbage...you're the focus of it lmfao dope fuckin line... All the fans you got from the tourney are soon to be pissed 'Cuz they don't wanna see you sunned, like a lunar eclipse another nice punch It took 3 battles to get you to check, fear's in ya bones with the marrow Last time you dropped hot shit was laxatives and habaneros rofl another nice punch... Sayin' you're the best whenever you bust, psh! Shut the hell up dog, you're not hot, so just shh! eh lol ok play on the name but im jus guessing u used it for the hell of it, it wasnt hard... Overall i liked hotsssh's verse but i thought 9th had harder punches and they were a lot more witty and thats what wins battles in my opinion how funny the punches are... good luck no hate peace
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02-08-05, 10:30 PM | #17 | ||||
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IP: 31E1 91F6
Voted For: hotshh!
hot took this one with harder punches and mettas. n some better personals. i was feelin tha all around flow, yo structure n all that, but ur last bar was kinda soft. i think u should elevate on that, and come harder on that next time. but ur overall flow was coo...i was feelin it... 9th-u had a good flow. i was feelin urs too...no hate, but u came kinda soft in a lotta places, and i wasnt feelin ur personals...come harder wit that next time, but that was kidna it, and he got u in punches...but, good drop... plz RTF on one of tha battle links in sig, and plz make it xplained if u vote for JDOT... good battle...~1~ |
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02-09-05, 08:52 AM | #18 | |||
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IP: A1EC 8B20
Voted For: hotshh!
Before KORV you were slept on, I still lay on the game 'Cuz you couldn't bring heat if I spotted you a play on my name ok start... vs Look, Ya rep is weak...Im draining fluids from ya Neck and Cheeks Until ya blood runs dryer..than Periods in their Second Week OO-SHIT DANM GOOD OPENER HAHA... Could be da Gay Animal Doctor......the way You a Homo Vet But like Peaceful Camera Shy Terrorists You 'Pose No Threat' haha funny and good... vs All the fans you got from the tourney are soon to be pissed 'Cuz they don't wanna see you sunned, like a lunar eclipse decent smoth and direct.... Dis 2 much weight on ya back its bout to Snap Ya Spine in 3 If Knowledge is Power..I guess I just Mastered my 9th Degree .................................................. ..................and im out. ha good ending and a personal off hes name good shit* but i had spit something like that befor but whatever * vs Sayin' you're the best whenever you bust, psh! Shut the hell up dog, you're not hot, so just shh danm weak ending and ya verse was lackin creativeness and hard punches dog for-real... nuce battle... |
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02-09-05, 08:55 AM | #19 | |||
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IP: A1EC 8B20
return da favor of a honest vote and explain it plez..........
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174354 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174024 |
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02-09-05, 04:21 PM | #20 | ||||
In ya area.
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IP: 3358 DF00
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02-09-05, 04:38 PM | #21 | ||||
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IP: 3B27 2020
Voted For: 9th Degree
Ya rep is weak...Im draining fluids from ya Neck and Cheeks Until ya blood runs dryer..than Periods in their Second Week Period lines= gay/played, u made a unique twist, but still not that hard or good U should go find a new habit..... like little kids with Cigarettes Cause 9th Degree 'pulls his punches'..right off of the Internet haha...... gotta laugh from me Could be da Gay Animal Doctor......the way You a Homo Vet But like Peaceful Camera Shy Terrorists You 'Pose No Threat' ehhh.... weakish punch, the setup was actually a better line U hated on me from da jump...dat I have no Ounce Of Doubt With Soc Dic so far in ya mouth ...it knocked ya Tounsils Out hah, kinda funny.......ok bar So if U 'Driven'.... U get shitted on like Cars with Open Roofs You'll feel this loss 24-7..... Your record will Show the Proof BEST bar of ur verse..... funny ass personal.... this one almost won u the battle Dis 2 much weight on ya back its bout to Snap Ya Spine in 3 If Knowledge is Power..I guess I just Mastered my 9th Degree Ive seen lines like this before, and random people just mentionin it in threads... but still a decent closer 9th Degree: Before KORV you were slept on, I still lay on the game 'Cuz you couldn't bring heat if I spotted you a play on my name hahaha, funny opener, this was way better than hotshh's in my mind Truthfully, you used to spit fire, now you'll get doused out Step again, I'll put your shh in a box like an outhouse haha.... nice wordplay and punch, decent bar Now now, I don't mean to get harsh but you want it Yeah, I admit my verse is garbage...you're the focus of it hahaha, not very good vocab, but funny ass line All the fans you got from the tourney are soon to be pissed 'Cuz they don't wanna see you sunned, like a lunar eclipse sunned lines=played, but ur twist on it was better than shh's twist on a played punch It took 3 battles to get you to check, fear's in ya bones with the marrow Last time you dropped hot shit was laxatives and habaneros ehhh, ive heard a similar line like this before.... get more creative Sayin' you're the best whenever you bust, psh! Shut the hell up dog, you're not hot, so just shh! haha, funny line........ not that good of a closer, but good play on his name.... overall i think 9th took this with constant personals that were funny and hard hitting..... hot needed some more decent personals like his "24-7" one to take this battle.... altho 9ths vocab wasnt that good, the personals and humour of his verse got him the win in my book... v/9th |
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02-09-05, 06:10 PM | #22 | |||||||
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IP: 888C 2BD4
damn 9th.........good battle........each vote everyone has different idea of whats a good bar..they either hate it or love it...cuz i thought i had this, could tell not ya best by the last bar.....................but i bet you feel the same way............ : )
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02-09-05, 06:17 PM | #23 | ||||
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IP: 258C A279
god damn...this is good ass battle...
battle of the month...
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02-09-05, 11:58 PM | #24 | |||||
In ya area.
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IP: 3358 DF00
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Word, you're truly a worthy competitor...we should try and get cats to vote this as battle of the month, like Skriptz said
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02-10-05, 12:07 AM | #25 | |||||||
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IP: 06B8 DBF2
Voted For: 9th Degree
Aiight wasnt the best battle I ever read, but it wasnt bad either I guess. Hotshh, your shit was ok, some of your punches were a bit weak or could of been worded better. But it wasnt a bad verse, I prefer funny text verses though.. I think if you can master the skill of making the reader laugh at your text punches then your well on your way to being the best on RV. Same goes with 9th.. At times your punches could of been better and at times they were sort of like "Yo your so wack!! And you cant drop hotshh".. You did however have one or two lines I liked.. Yeah, I admit my verse is garbage...you're the focus of it ---and--- Last time you dropped hot shit was laxatives and habaneros Those are edging on the sort of punches I like reading.. Anyway, 9th got the battle in my opinion. But yeah, keep droppin the good shit to both. Peace. |
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02-10-05, 11:08 AM | #26 | ||||
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
hotshh! i was just feelin yo verse more. i think u came more prepared, and just came harder wit tha punches, and personals in this one. i think u had more originalty in this one, n i didnt see too many play'd lines...
9th- i was feelin yo verse too. i was lovin tha punches, but alota em seemed play'd to me, i dunno...just what i felt. i wasnt too much feelin yo structure either. u had a good drop, but not interesting at all...just come harder next time... had to xplain more RTF HOT...DAMN |
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02-10-05, 03:44 PM | #27 | ||||
In ya area.
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IP: 3358 DF00
^It's straight J, I knew you voted honestly to begin with...
Anyways, uppin'.
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02-10-05, 03:54 PM | #28 | ||||
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IP: B1A5 868C
Voted For: 9th Degree
Opener goes too Hotshh, the period in the second week line lol, nice... Wasnt feelin that gay animal doctor line tho, they were the high n low points of ya verse hotshh... 9th, ya opener was uncreative, but you got better with age in the battle, kinda like wine lol, closer killed it, had me in fits laughin at it, for creativty an better wordplay, 9th gets my vote but both verses were hot, keep em comin, decent battle vote goes too 9th Peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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