Voted For: Elementality

to be honest i thought this was quite close.first off elementality had better structure, the kid ya bars were uneven, work on that, also the kid..that "make it fresher" line..
i dnt know if its intentional but thats a line from an eminem track.vocab goes to elementality,punnches pretty even, you both cud hve bin more creative.overall fairly tight but element tried to get sum personals in, not much in it but a slightly better drop from elementality gives him this on.


please return an honest vote
thanks
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=183740

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Voted For: Elementality



Elementality, for your own benefit homie just quit
Give yourself three days to drop and your verse is still shit
^^^didnt cut it man, 2/10

Its absurd, how easily I can kill you with words, leave you full with pressure
If i bit your fucking style, id only make it fresher
^^^didnt hit either 2/10
Ill leave you hurt, psycially and emotionally scared
drop you from a plane thats the only way u hittin hard
^^creative but played 4/10

My words will open a hole in your throat, make you choke
haha, you battlein me? this some early april fools joke?
^^nope man 1/10

When readin my verse, ill have you scared to read the next line, keep tryin
You should battle me when you look out the window and pigs are flyin
decent 5/10

"Hi Guys! I'm kid 523, I really enjoy wear'n fubu, and act' O.G.
I rhyme monosylabically with shit like knee, tree, and C.D."
^^nope 3/10
-This little tykes the real deal. hes so crazy he's on a crew.
Too bad you're so square you think be'in sick is havin the flu.
played right there 3/10

His flows a figment of his imagination, like his friend fredrick.
Even If this kid had some vision, he'd still need a walking stick.
^^different but played 6/10

I'm willing to bet that this kids a twelve-year old spoilt little brat.
Once hes done posting his shitt, he'll move over to his play mat.
personal i hope 4/10
Your versus' are cracked, like readin a crackers Auto-Biography.
Heres some advice kid: quit rymin and stick to Child-pornography.
1/10

Elementality
you won this shit by far, had the better verse but eleavtion is needed but get at my battle and drop an honest vote
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184150

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Voted For: the kid 523

Elementality...

"Hi Guys! I'm kid 523, I really enjoy wear'n fubu, and act' O.G.
I rhyme monosylabically with shit like knee, tree, and C.D."
No...You're Elementality, and that punch didn't even flow or rhyme...0/10
-This little tykes the real deal. hes so crazy he's on a crew.
Too bad you're so square you think be'in sick is havin the flu.
Sick/being sick lines are played out...2/10
His flows a figment of his imagination, like his friend fredrick.
Even If this kid had some vision, he'd still need a walking stick.
Fake personal/not a good punch...2/10
I'm willing to bet that this kids a twelve-year old spoilt little brat.
Once hes done posting his shitt, he'll move over to his play mat.
You called him a little kid...wow...2/10
Your versus' are cracked, like readin a crackers Auto-Biography.
Heres some advice kid: quit rymin and stick to Child-pornography.
Eh...4/10

Verse = 10/50


The Kid...

Elementality, for your own benefit homie just quit
Give yourself three days to drop and your verse is still shit
Wack...it's getting played out...3/10
Its absurd, how easily I can kill you with words, leave you full with pressure
If i bit your fucking style, id only make it fresher
Bad structure...but funny ass punch...5/10
Ill leave you hurt, psycially and emotionally scared
drop you from a plane thats the only way u hittin hard
Good punch, nice meta...5/10
My words will open a hole in your throat, make you choke
haha, you battlein me? this some early april fools joke?
Funny, because it is April Fools...if it wasn't that would be wack...6/10
When readin my verse, ill have you scared to read the next line, keep tryin
You should battle me when you look out the window and pigs are flyin
No....this was fuckin wack...0/10

Verse = 19/50

Well, this battle was horrible...just because you center your verse and have a good structure... it doesn't make your verse any better. People should vote on punches...not looks.

Vote/Kid...

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You my BOY BLUE!..... that was some hard judgin dood,I think you should take your beef out on the things that are bothering you....or better yet a pillow........insteada take'n your personal endevours out on rapverse.

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uppin this shit

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