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| KhAoZ ThEoRy |
  
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2 | 28.57% |
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5 | 71.43% |
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05-31-05, 10:05 AM
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IP: B1A5 868C
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! okaiz idea but aint relly hit to hard This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun... Skippin over gats? Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!! that was a littl bettr Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! it aint rhime nd it wasnt very gud anyway joo could of used your ideas alot bettr than you did nd ur flow was owf because u seperated bars but gud playing off ur ideas with words ''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority! U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' i likd it gud flow nd personal dizz Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!** it were ok Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! d best bar in d battl daubs was mor creativity in his rhymes but khaoz structured nd dropped a few personals nd fe punchlines so his verse gets d vote |
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05-31-05, 12:03 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
upppppppppiiiiinnnnnngggggggg like hot air baloons.
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05-31-05, 08:03 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
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06-01-05, 02:27 PM
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IP: 8F9D 8B56
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06-02-05, 04:27 AM
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
Voted For: Daubs
ight close battle.... daubs i thought you had some good lines and some bad lines... you need to upyour vocab becuz the punches u r using now arnt rlly that hard hitting... i think u just edged this battle though, here is some of your lines i liked: Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! ^^ good wordplay and decent punch not really played here is a line i didn't like: Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! ^^ not really feelin it weak punch there overall u had a strong enough verse to take the win, like i said think of better concepts for your punches and you'll be on your way! khaoz: damn man u have elevated alot since u came to this site man good job on that... all you need to do is match up your structure and you'll be alot better even with your punches the way they are now... here is 1 line i liked: ''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority! U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' ^^ this was a dope line man really feelin it here is a line i didn't like: Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! ^^ played out man if u had one punch like the first one you wouldav got this but u threw it away man try to stay consistant throughout your battles man have them ard hitting punches from beginning to the end, then you will get it v/ daubs for edging the punches, he had harder hitting punches and stayed consistant through this battle... good job stay up this was a real close battle pz |
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06-02-05, 06:27 AM
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IP: D190 7D63
Voted For: Daubs
Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! //nice intro, funnny and a goood swipe This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun... Skippin over gats? Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!! //like the delivery, smooth flow, nice Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! //quite weak in relation to the rest depends how u flow it but it reads a lil messy 2 me, not the best finisher i've heard from you though daubs. no hate and kaos: ''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority! U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' //another nice intro, good shit kaos Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!** //personal, good 7/10, but ive heard you hit harder Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! //another so-so finisher. but again no hate max luv 2 both my boyz i can appreciate that this was a quick battle between friends and both your flows were more casual than your usuals, i personally think anyways. but i have to give the win to daubs for better structure, and better puns kaos you battled well and there wasn't much in it, if you tidy up your structure a bit you can be a big force in this RV game, both of y'all keep uppin, thug luv 2 all arch out
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