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Champion
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IP: 237F 881B
uppin dis i want this closed....i will RETURN WITH HONEST FEED
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Don't Even Think About It
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This was feedback posted for Intermental
IP: 544A 12EA
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Champion
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IP: DAC2 5B96
uppin i will definitely return the favor.............
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Middle Weight
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This was feedback posted for Intermental
IP: 828D 0B7A
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Champion
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IP: 363E 3B1E
uppin dis............................................... ..........
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Champion
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IP: 03D3 6E24
upppppin dis......................................
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Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
Voted For: Intermental
ight umm this was a weak battle in my eyes but imma break it down.... mad rapper: Even with a style of speech you couldn’t smile and reach People like preachers do just a creature to ugly to rap best I teach ^^ ok line weak punch though Your brains and impeach your mainframe, your voice seem to squeak And your scheme is weak which tells me you don’t have a team freak. ^^ not feeling this at all Even with the help of Abraham Lincoln you couldn’t have a plan To rock a nation like the emancipation of Proclamation done do you understand? ^^ nop again man i wasn't feeling your verse at all really.. u need to think of punches coz the ones u are throwing now are weak real weak... so think of ceoncepts and word them good andf then you'll be on your way... inter: When I spit, I cum hard, like I have verbal intercourse I fucked your brain up and showed absoloutly no remorse ^^ ok line not really hard hitting You spit multis and similes like they are verbal diarrhea Cause your shit stank even before it hit my ear ^^ not feeling this at all sorry man Kid, you spit wack scripts you get *divided* like mathematics your verbal tactics are weak its only good fur the LACTOSE-INTORLENT MADD you end up in willy wonaks factory cos u get broke down like cocaine and just remain as a GALACTOSE-OCCUPENT ^^ lmao talk about stretched it was ok just alor stretched Yo Madrapper is whack so when JRoy gave feed Madrapper had to diss him This nigga needs to change his name to badrapper cos this another quick win ^^ lol umm ok personals not really feeling the last line ight man u have some elevating to do in the punches and structure aspect they are better than mad's but the are still weak... hit up teph and see how u can improve on punches all u need to do for your structure is match upo your syllable count from 12-15 syllabls in 1 line... ight v/inter he had better punches and a better all around verse pz |
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IP: CF74 5D3A
hey let me tell yall cats my punchlines are brand new the average cat will never ever think of these punchlines how can they be weak when you can't even think of punchlines like this you can say as you please i won this on mere creactivity WHY YALL LOVE THAT OLD PLAYED OUT SHIT? HE DIDN'T WIN THIS HE'S THINKING TOO SIMPLE HA! HA! HA!
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Odi et Amo
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IP: C9A2 1C80
Voted For: Intermental
Intermental When I spit, I cum hard, like I have verbal intercourse I fucked your brain up and showed absoloutly no remorse ^okay opener, no punch though You spit multis and similes like they are verbal diarrhea Cause your shit stank even before it hit my ear ^lolz likin this Kid, you spit wack scripts you get *divided* like mathematics your verbal tactics are weak its only good fur the LACTOSE-INTORLENT MADD you end up in willy wonaks factory cos u get broke down like cocaine and just remain as a GALACTOSE-OCCUPENT ^dayummmmmm, hot bar right here! Got everyting in it, wordplay, multi, personal, punch...Whoa... Yo Madrapper is whack so when JRoy gave feed Madrapper had to diss him This nigga needs to change his name to badrapper cos this another quick win ^good closer That one bar just killed it fo real, others were kinda basic and nothing special but then BAM....bold one...structure was cool, flow was aight, vocab okay and punches/personals were there MADDRAPPER[/b] Even with a style of speech you couldn’t smile and reach People like preachers do just a creature to ugly to rap best I teach ^not really feelin opener but aight Your brains and impeach your mainframe, your voice seem to squeak And your scheme is weak which tells me you don’t have a team freak. ^cool bar, nice punch Even with the help of Abraham Lincoln you couldn’t have a plan To rock a nation like the emancipation of Proclamation done do you understand? ^coo closer Aight, solid verse right here, had some punches, no real personals though, flow was excellent as well as structure and vocab but I feel it couldn't compete with that one bar from Intermental, no hate man
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