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Old 10-23-05, 08:23 PM   #1
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Old 10-23-05, 08:49 PM   #2
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Dope drop as usual drama.....................

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Old 10-24-05, 02:34 PM   #3
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Upping this to the very top of the page, maybe get some votes on it too...
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Old 10-24-05, 09:01 PM   #4
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Voted For: Drama Queen

drama queen- i really liked ur topical, it had a lot of emotion, n the concept wuz good... im likin how it fit the topic of mirrored worlds, the ending made the whole thing a lot deeper, i reread the whole thing after that n certain lines had completely different meanings after knowin wut the endin is... good vocab, maybe a bit excessive tho... overall its still great

dilligence- the writin isnt at all bad, but the topical didnt really match the topics, u say "mirrored world" at th end, but that doesnt make it a mirrored world... woulda been better if u'd made it more abstract, witout dates n stuff, n then sed that today's worl mirrors back then, or suttin like that... also would been better if the endin gave meanin to it, like dqs did... basically, if u had read it carefully (which i had) u'd already kno that it wuz civil rights era, cuz of the dates n historical references n stuff... not bad tho

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Old 10-25-05, 01:38 PM   #5
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Thanks for the vote...

Uppity Up Up

Keep em coming...
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Old 11-12-05, 02:04 AM   #6
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ive seen this verse every where.....................
 
Old 11-12-05, 10:35 AM   #7
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that was beautiful Dili...... way to hold it down playa...... checkin polls and uppin for my fam, Diligence
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Old 11-13-05, 01:42 PM   #8
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Upping this to the very top of the page so we can get some more votes!
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Old 11-26-05, 01:06 PM   #9
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Upping this once again

Come on people, vote up

I'll return the favor!
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Old 12-13-05, 12:21 PM   #10
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Argh....

I just wanna get this shit closed ASAP
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Old 12-17-05, 04:41 PM   #11
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