Not be a prick or anything................but can I get a RTF?

Voted For: Wicked One

mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite
i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights
^^^no weak opener...
i'm gon give shots to da head and have ya c'n stripes after dat merkn up wit a pipe
people gone have ta call da albulance to save ya life cause ya only 1min to live dem right
^^^No punch weak
if u survive i'm gon b batman fuck ya up in da night cause darkness is where i lurk "out of sight"
if u 4get who did dis to ya da name is Snipes and if u cant rememba u betta try wit all ya "might"
^^^no.....sorry
cause if ya cant rememba ma name next life time i aint gon be so nice//
^^^weak closer

My punches break spines and the next phase is to rape minds...
But you can’t keep up with this vets pace so take five...
^^^Ight opener
Or I’ll cut your body in half at the waist line...
And you’re probly on the jake’s side so fuck your fake rhymes...
^^^Weak
I’ve almost made this place mine...
Moderating emcees cuz I’ve slain at least a hundred...
^^^???
And it ain’t no thang to leave you sonned, kid...
Actually, that’s what I just done did...
^^ight closer

This was a weak battle both came wit weak verse's yah need to elavate.....snipes ur verse had no punchs or anything good no personal or wordplay....werk on all of it....wicked i thought u were better u had a weak verse wit little diss's....but it was better than snipes.....u get my vote....RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED

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Voted For: Snipes

this was terrrible...both verses were real bad lacking intesity.....but if i gotta vote on one of em..id say...Snipes, ur punches were better, and flow was much more fluid then Wicked One.

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Snipes Best Lines:
mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite
i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights

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Wicked One Best Lines:
My punches break spines and the next phase is to rape minds...
But you can’t keep up with this vets pace so take five...

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Upppppppiiiiinnnnnn......(Oh yeah Snipes Iam up 2-0 not 2-2 dont lie in ur sig man)...

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

it would be 2-2 but u got ma votes moved
when urs exactly da same

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uppin i'm losing dawg aight
happy................

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

Voted For: Wicked One

mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite
i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights
i'm gon give shots to da head and have ya c'n stripes after dat merkn up wit a pipe
people gone have ta call da albulance to save ya life cause ya only 1min to live dem right
if u survive i'm gon b batman fuck ya up in da night cause darkness is where i lurk "out of sight"
if u 4get who did dis to ya da name is Snipes and if u cant rememba u betta try wit all ya "might"
cause if ya cant rememba ma name next life time i aint gon be so nice//

i think you got a flow but you need to focus more when you write dont keep flowin the same words on a basic level you know add a twist or come more complex say people would say these are basic rhymes but still decent rhymes its not like you rhyme about noting you had a focus but get a little more complex then that aight and u'll be straight





My punches break spines and the next phase is to rape minds...
But you can’t keep up with this vets pace so take five...
Or I’ll cut your body in half at the waist line...
And you’re probly on the jake’s side so fuck your fake rhymes...
I’ve almost made this place mine...
Moderating emcees cuz I’ve slain at least a hundred...
And it ain’t no thang to leave you sonned, kid...
Actually, that’s what I just done did...

i feel like you got more straight ot the point with good rhymes and nice punches more focus flow and keep hiting more consistent and i felt like you took this one

my vote: one

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