Avalon wins cuz Amend said "gee golly"....GameTime.......







blah...here it goes.....

opener+1-Amend
closer+1-Av
punches+2-Amend
personals+2-Av
multis+1-Amend
wordplay+1-Amend
complexity+1-tie
originality+1-tie
cornyness-2-none
enjoyment+1-Amend

overall------Avalon (+5)....Amend (+8)----Winner..no hate...can u please drop honest vote in link below..thanx...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97367

aight i thought i would drop a vote on this...i've read through it few times would you believe...knowin avs battles i thought he would come harder...he had some great wordplay, i do like his style it is interesting...something different then everyone else, i think thats great...i do think amend came really well..at the start there was some nice wordplay, as i got into the middle lines i felt the punches and was amazed by some of the wordplay...i think av had some nice personals...it was a close battle...i do think amend had better wordplay and punches which took me on this.....

vote=amend

great battle and props to both....i really enjoyed the read...

plz hit up the link below on a honest vote thanx yall

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...81&pagenumber=1

Well, After 7 Trys I Beat You Av. YAY
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damn close battle in some ways....but Avalon had some lines that i've seen before..no hate to ya duke....but some of ur lines were kinda old...for example

^^ur entire opener had played punches...(spandex and fever)

honestly...i think Amend got this with harder punches and better creativity and wordplay....here's the line that killed it

^^lol...that was actually funny...

BREAKDOWN
Punches - Amend (hit harder)
Flow - Avalon
Complexity - Amend
Personals - Tie
Creativity - Amend
RhymeScheme - Amend
Vocab - Tie
Structure - Avalon
Wordplay - Amend (more updated wordplay)
Overall - in my honest opinion Amend got this like i said just with much harder punches and a more original/creative verse....good read from u both though...no hate..just a vote..

peace
4:20

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Damn KO on The Polls, 4-1 Though
Uppin For This To Finish.
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yeah i voted....drop an honest vote with the rather quikcness please:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97367

Uppin This To End And Polls Updated. .
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Opening: Amend
Punches: Avalon
Personals: Avalon
Flow: Amend
Wordplay: Avalon
Vocab: Amend
Structure: Avalon
Closing: Avalon
Overall: Avalon

I expected to see more from you amend but oh well good batttle..

ROFL...I got this shit backwards on my vote..I read wrong verse for avalon and amend...So can a mod please change my vote to amend...

good battle...

Punches: Av
Wordplay: Av
Flow/Structure: Amend
Multis: Amend
Closer:Av
Verdict: AV

Good battle. Dope shit..Funny to read...even though long...

Peace

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I Speak Out
Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

opener amend
closer AV
punches av harder hitting
personals av definitly
wordplay amend
overal av harder punches nicer personals and that is word

Avalon - I was really feeling some of the punches in there. I thought it could have used a little more personals, but the verse was still good. Your didnt fall off, it was consistant. Nice wordplay, and use of vocab. It was an all around good diss, it had my attention through the whole thing.

Amend - You had some punches that were real nice, but not as much as Avalon had. You had way better word play I thought. Your vocab was good, not to much and not to little. Both of you had good structure. I liked your opener, and thats what is making this a hard decision.

Vote - Avalon

Conclusion - I was feeling his punches more. I felt he brought more intensity into the battle. Amend, still did a great job. So I give my props to both of you. But, I gave it to avalon because of Harder punches. That is what I though... Nice Battle to Both...

( Can you please return the favor and make an honest vote on the battle in my sig. It would be much appriciated... )

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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that makes it 1-5(Amend)

lol@only a minute between whitelightning and emerge. . .



Mods fix the polls and close this please

Hey Amend,
Can you please return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig.
I would like to know your opinion in that battle, much appriciated.
UPPIN

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