newbies.....lol.....dude dat was lame peace

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yo rv quit sleepin peep n leave ur feedback plz holl back peace

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good drop u guys..both of yall...keep it up

Yo, let me know if you wanna do a remix on that shit. That's pretty tight, but I think throwin' me on there can only improve it, know what i'm sayin'?

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Yo im a person of truth
and i know you can tell that by my past post an shit,
but this is the truth,,,I felt like this whole piece was really expressive
And heart felt,,I can really feel where your both comming from,,
My best friends are white,,but i have friends that want except that,
But I dont put my real friends down for no one,,So i told the one being ugly
that i wanted nothing else to do with them,,,And its been that way every since,
You see God gave us all our own hearts to make our own choises,,
An I chose to keep my real friends,,,I dont care what color they are,,
There all my brothers,,because we are all Gods kids,,I just wish people would realize that,,,im black,but im what ever color you choose to call me,,because im your brother
no matter what people say,,,we'er all family,but some of us choose not to except that..
But I pray for those who are lost and bound by the devil,,,and hope some day they see the truth as I do,,,,
I just wanted you guys to know that your not alone when feeling this way,,
And you can alway count on me as a friend any time you need me,,,,
Your callab was hot an very true,,,If we as blacks can chill an call one another nigga,
then why should we get up set when some one white say it,,knowing daum well there
using it the same way we are,,,So why get mad?,,,,
If any one black dislikes what im saying ,,,,then tough,,because God guides my heart towards this theory,,,,Nice drop,,,But true as well,,,,,you have opened my heart to something others of color refuce to face,,,but I will because God keeps my heart in check,,,,,God bless all...1....10-10

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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

yo dawg i feel ya man n thx for da feedback ppl need to b like u dawg, well thx for all da feedback but we still uppin for more, iite 1 love

yo dam Rv lets go stop fuckin sleepin n peep dis shit n let us get soem feedback i have ben postin on ery god dam thread in open mic, cmon return da favor

ayo rv quit sleepin 4 real give feedback u page skimmers shit i leave n ive seen he leaves replies on every1's shit u fuckers cant return da favor hit us up peace

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lets go dam, i duno how many times i sed hit up da collabos lets go man shit

yo man ppl lets get sum feedback yo im UP!!!!!

nice nice... good content, solid structure... it's a bit long and hard to read but it was worth getting through it! a couple of lines are a bit simple and played but all around this is good shit man... keep it up!

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yo dawg thx for da love, yo we still uppin for sum more feedback, lets go i fuckin reply to evrythin i read , shit it will only take a minute

5micmedallion good looks on da love n much respect u like da niggaz i knew n grew up real n down 4 they tru friends n every1 else thanx 4 da feedback n love i see ya'll like me n emergin's callabo's u'll see more peep our newest 1 shit hot holla back 1 luv peace out n definetly uppin dis piece ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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"get yo blood pressure buildin with each fuckin line." one of my favorite sentences.
"yo dawg im white and illa then u, guess it was fate." another one of my favorite lines.

dont let people down u just cuz white, race ain't got shit to do with it. keep doin your thing

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i dont make the list. dont get mad at me.
i just make the hits like a factory

-Jay-Z

like The Gooch Disappear...vamoose...you're wack to me
take them rhymes back to the factory

-Notorious B.I.G

once again the shit was coo and every one must agree

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