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Old 08-25-04, 08:13 AM   #31
raw killa
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if u newbies liked our las callabo peep dis shit n quit sleepin 4 real
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Old 08-25-04, 01:05 PM   #32
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damn man, that's powerful.


sure is...shit was deep, dope, and i can relate to snake ass bitches like that...nice drop yall...holla at me for another collab!!
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Old 08-25-04, 01:20 PM   #33
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raw killa ft. emerginmc07

(cell fone rings...i pick up)
(girl)-hey baby how r u?
(me)-im good mami how bout u?im on my way home...
(man's voice in back ground)cum back 2 bed...
(me)-wtf who was dat u....?cheatin on me....?
(girl)no wut r u tlkn bout?
(man's voice)-c'mon baby fuck dat dude
(me)-him dat guy bitch u cheatin on me?
(girl)-no its not like dat calm down
(me)-no bitch u calm down ima !?@!#!!?!? u n him up bye

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I checked enough of your flow out to know you have nice talent.
However, what is up with the intro? First of all, that woman in the intro could NOT be black that you're on the phone with because there would be NO such thing as,"No it's not like that, calm down" after you've called her a bit#h. lol Depending on how mature/immature she is, you might have not even been able to type this cuz she wouldda chopped yuh bloodclaat fingers off!
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Old 08-26-04, 02:45 AM   #34
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it was an intro goin in 2 da song wasnt suppose 2 b a black gurl i do dat my own race...white chicks ya kno...even though darker is better in my opinion...lol but thanx 4 da love but u should kno how intro's work
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Old 08-26-04, 04:58 PM   #35
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yo this was tight man nice shit keep droppin that real and strong shit...
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Old 08-26-04, 05:48 PM   #36
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it was an intro goin in 2 da song wasnt suppose 2 b a black gurl i do dat my own race...white chicks ya kno...even though darker is better in my opinion...lol but thanx 4 da love but u should kno how intro's work

LOL Okay then..

Yes I know how intros work, but I also know how they suck when they are just totally farfetched; it sets a terrible pace for the actual song/rhyme no matter how good it is because depending upon the effect the intro has (postive or negative to a person), it determines whether or not that person will even give the song a listen.

But that is general advice and it is to, in no way, take away from the talent I see that you have.
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