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Tephlon 5 83.33%
Judicial 1 16.67%
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Old 05-13-05, 07:11 AM   #31
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Old 05-13-05, 10:36 AM   #32
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This was feedback posted for Judicial

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^^^nice job battlecats. IM UPPIN' THIS SHIT FOR MY BOY JUDE!!!^^^


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Old 05-14-05, 05:32 AM   #33
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Old 05-18-05, 09:53 AM   #34
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uppin this i guewss...................shit is gettin mad slept on
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Old 05-19-05, 03:01 PM   #35
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Personals-Judicial....u got him on this category..Teph u had a nice personal in there to.

Punches-Tephlon..only seen one but the "Hot text" punch was funny and creative.

Vocab-Judicial....nice use of vocab

Multis- None...try usen sum multiples in there

Structure-Judicial...Not hard to read.Teph ya structure was fucked up playa.

Overall Vote-Judicial due to the personals,vocab and structure. Teph u had one extra line over the specified number of barz.
Both emcees had a nice verse honestly...all i gotta say now is just elevate more.

*this is how i'd vote if i could,but im only given feedback
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Old 05-21-05, 07:47 AM   #36
Carlton Banks
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From: Bel-air.
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Voted For: Tephlon

tephlon- i think you had a decent verse, punches were solid all the way through but you had one played concept which was your last line. your flow was ok, hte best thing about your verse was your personals. they all hit hard.
best bar-
i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four
cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore!
i award you 60%.

judicial- your verse was decent but was weaker than tephs. punches were weak but your main downfall wa that one line in your second bar. you just glorified yourself and there was no punch. on the other hand your follow up was good.
best bar-
This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience
he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period
you get 35%.
v/tephlon.
rtf in my sig against ca$per teph. no hate.
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Old 05-21-05, 07:49 AM   #37
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Old 06-02-05, 07:06 AM   #38
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Voted For: Tephlon

I think that Tephlon got this battle because i feel that Tephlon came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Tephlon got it they were used effectifely and were on point Judicial u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Tephlon good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Tephlon and flow and structure i'll give to Tephlon.

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Old 06-02-05, 08:48 AM   #39
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i could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass
u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1)

Ok

ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2)
give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message

Needed re-wording and creativity added, ok

This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience
he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3)

lol ok

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Mistah A Got u to battle?
.........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew
just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!!

Str8 personal

i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four
cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore!

Weak+played

callin yourself a respectable head?...
......................................please tell me that aint a fact??
i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract!
..........................................
Yeah this was the only nice bar of the battle

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Old 06-03-05, 10:44 AM   #40
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Old 06-08-05, 04:16 PM   #41
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Voted For: Tephlon

Nice Battle But My Vote goes to TEPH!
~*EXPLANA TION*~
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Mistah A Got u to battle?
.........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew
just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!!
^6/10
i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four
cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore!
^LoL 7/10
callin yourself a respectable head?...
......................................please tell me that aint a fact??
i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract!
^7/10
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i could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass
u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1)
^7/10
ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2)
give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message
^weak 6/10
This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience
he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3)
^6/10
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Judicial Ya Verse was good just that the RHYMIN scheme was Off!Structure was good!n personalz were koo!but TEPHLONS shyt was alot better!PUNCHES hit Harder!Personalz Were Good!Structure was Ok!so my vote goes to TEPH!
( RTF OR THIS VOTEZ REMOVED )
RTF in my Link Battle With MIZZ FYRE!
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Old 06-12-05, 12:50 AM   #42
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Voted For: Judicial

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Old 06-12-05, 01:49 AM   #43
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This was feedback posted for Tephlon

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can't vote yet so i'm just checking the polls nah mean
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Old 06-16-05, 09:41 AM   #44
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Old 06-16-05, 12:19 PM   #45
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Voted For: Tephlon

Mistah A Got u to battle?
.........................,,,,,,.your runnin a pussy ass crew
just ask Mizz Fyre.........even she's ashamed of you!!!!
6...decent personal punch here, the setup was relevant but cud be better worded for harder affect as well as the punch itself.
i rest my case in 2 lines, so i'll just waste these next four
cause the only ''hot text'' u ever have is cyberin your whore!
5...decent concept for a personal, but i think you worded it a little basic.
callin yourself a respectable head?...
......................................please tell me that aint a fact??
i got approched by this whack, because opposites attract!
6...ok bar, good way to finish off the verse.

OVERALL: 17/30



i could sit u n a room labeled 1 and give u a hall pass
u can leave n comeback and still wouldnt be in the first class(1)
5...not feelin this really, too basic for me and the way you used the first class shit was weak.
ima cause lyrical supression to this manz RV obsession(2)
give em a radar,he still aint detectin this subliminal message
0...no hate with this but.....obsession and message dont rhyme at the end, maybe with different accents they might but to me they do not.
This kid is seriously wack for his amount of RV experience
he bitches more than girls on they monthly menstrals...period..(3)
5...worded basic, but still prolly your best bar.

OVERALL: 10/30


tephlon was consistent
had decent punches, the one i wasn't feelin as much, wordplay was basic, but the personal punches were there

judicial came weak....
two average bars.
one that didnt rhyme to me. basic all the way through, need to get more complex with ya punches.

V/ - Tephlon
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