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T.r.oo.P | 2 | 28.57% | |
Still Motion | 5 | 71.43% | |
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08-08-05, 05:09 PM | #31 | |
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08-08-05, 10:51 PM | #32 |
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Voted For: Still Motion
Troop- Alright The best Aspect of this verse was "Imagery". I liked the details you went. The Emotion should be upp a little. Vocab was good, you had a good balance. To me this was more like basic, didnt have no metaphors, no lots of emotion, just plain imagery. Which was good, but to me it was more basic vividly portrait though. The Appraoch was kinda played out to me, the concept wasn't too good as well. Still Motion-I liked your verse. The Best Aspect was the imagery. Which was very detailed More poetic. You Had Vocab, which was good. THis was a good battle in the category of "Imagery"...Word Conclusion- This was a hard decension but I vote for Still Motion. Basically his Concept was more better, and the approach was more better. The imagery Gave the concept and the approach, More Greater. Troop, You had a good verse but the concept was Un-Creative, the approach was good but the concept was just bleh, I liked your imagery very Much Detailed. So I had to vote for who had the best Concept....and Approach Plus creativeness.....V/ Still Motion
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08-08-05, 11:02 PM | #33 |
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Voted For: T.r.oo.P
Troop WOW....this was a good peice.At first,at beggining,I was like..what the fuck is this man talking about?But when the end came,I realized you were talking about suicide.DOPE concept here.As for the wording,it was ight.....not perfect though...could use some improvement.Just try to make it so the lines appear to made for each other.Your vocabulary was nice.So was flow.Those a more complex rhyme shceme would be nice. Still Motion Umm....your wording was horiible.You were all over the place.It was a mess.Vocabulary is good thing when used correctly...but I felt you used it bad.Also...you shoulda made it longer to try to describe it more.Big words alone doesn't make it dope. Vote-Troop RTF BELOW PLEASE http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203668 |
08-12-05, 12:54 AM | #34 | |
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08-15-05, 10:15 PM | #35 | |
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08-15-05, 10:18 PM | #36 |
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you another one em who doesn't return favors....shit..last time I vote in 1 ur battles
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08-17-05, 09:46 PM | #37 | |
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01-29-06, 05:16 PM | #38 | |
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This was feedback posted for Still Motion
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Eating Steel Sheets sounds like a pretty gay topic to me..
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01-30-06, 07:55 AM | #39 | |
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IP: 860D ECBB
Voted For: T.r.oo.P
Checking polls nice one fams,.. 1~ Removed |
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01-30-06, 08:04 AM | #40 | |
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I will get that removed,.. good luck both,...
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01-30-06, 10:57 PM | #41 |
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This was feedback posted for T.r.oo.P
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checkin the polls troop...........................
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01-31-06, 02:02 AM | #42 | |
Middle Weight
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Voted For: Still Motion
Wow this was and orgy of words... really liked the imagery in both verses... really liked SM's word usage over all... with that being said both verses had a very nice flow... and both stuck the subject though one was notedly far more creative... all in all the was one of the best topical battles I've read in awhile... good shit from both of you Opener: SM Closer: SM Imagery: SM Structure: T.R.O.O.P. Vocab: SM Creativity: SM Complexity: SM Enjoyment: SM Vote: SM
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01-31-06, 02:19 PM | #43 | |
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: Still Motion
troops pretty gay, he ducked me
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02-04-06, 05:47 PM | #44 | |
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IP: 5021 8C8D
Voted For: Still Motion
i vote for motion u had better rymes and flow troop wasnt feelin ur rymes tonite and ur flow but good structure no hate u both did good |
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