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fuxjustaword 2 28.57%
c.a.l.i 5 71.43%
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Old 01-21-05, 05:23 PM   #46
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people dont like to vote i guess..... .
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Old 01-21-05, 05:38 PM   #47
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Old 01-21-05, 10:46 PM   #48
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lazy asspeople dont wanna vote .
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Old 01-22-05, 02:42 PM   #49
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yall lazy mutha fuckas
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Old 01-22-05, 03:48 PM   #50
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werd........ dope battle.....
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Old 01-22-05, 09:34 PM   #51
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uppin...... lazy as hell people
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Old 01-23-05, 10:59 AM   #52
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damn...... i would offer some money for a damn vote, but that would be swayin like woah
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Old 01-23-05, 12:39 PM   #53
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Old 01-23-05, 04:00 PM   #54
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god damn............ lazy people.......... get in here and vote
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Old 01-23-05, 09:11 PM   #55
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people wont even return favors eitherr.................
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Old 01-24-05, 06:02 AM   #56
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Old 01-24-05, 07:02 AM   #57
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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Good verses from both.

CALI: Your opener was real good. Metaphor used to hit the punch personally. Definately killed his open. Ya close was fucking heavy! was well feeling that. I liked the last bit bout 'big'. Was definately cool and beat his closer. Your personals were thick and fast in this, you definately done your homework. Punches were real good, at the highest level. Your flow was good making it easy to read and the structure had no faults. Very nice wordplay towards the end aswel by the way. The obvious winning verse.

Fuxjustaword: Your opener was cool, but not good enough against CALIs. Your close was ok wiv nice metaphor but once again came off alittle lighter in my opinion. No real personals there. The problem was that you used the shit in the toilet thing wen there is alot more you can use than that. The punched were good. I particularly liked the "listed as black" line. But all in all your punches and personals lost you this
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Old 01-24-05, 09:17 AM   #58
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Old 01-24-05, 11:11 AM   #59
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Voted For: FuxJustAWord

woahhh both of you are on fireeeeeeeeeeee...........

anywayz imma have to give this to fuxjustaword becuz his personals girlled you.... c.a.l.i u had some good personals but i thought fux hit harder and were more personal if you get me...

anywayz both of your verses were firee.... you both had good flow and your punches and personals were both good...

fuxjustaword...

i liked your verse alot and your personals killed him... i liked the wendy's line that was funny shit and the dumping shit line was funny shit aswell.... overall i thought your punches flow structure and personals were all on point... nice job 8.5/10

c.a.l.i

i liked your verse but i think you killed it with the fux lines that baffled me and i didnt really like it... all the rest of your verse was on point and you had some decent personals, the only reason you lost this battle is because your flow was a lil bit choopy in some places and that fux line was what fucked me up but all in all your verse was still hot.... overall ill give you 8.2/10 becuz of your flow and that line...

so that about sums it up both verses were great but fux edged it with his harder hitting personals

plz return the favout links are in the sig.... pz... no hate
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Old 01-25-05, 09:59 PM   #60
M&rk
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Voted For: C.A.L.I

'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya
6^^^good shit, that fux fux fux shit was funny as hell, and i take it he's got a picture of biggy in his sig, and if he does thats a stupid good personal and wordplay.

CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
^^^decent personal, but it didn't hit all that hard... your just callin him a girls name, not that hot of a punch, but good wordplay.
So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
^^^coulda worded this better sayin, that you up the battle( usin wordplay) idk if thats what you were tryin to say... since your in the battle your upin the skills in it or summin... but if thats what you were tryin to say u need to reword it.... also rhyming cattle with battle is never a good idea
.... imma have a battle up tomorrow... if you see it, get at it
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