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Old 06-27-05, 08:16 PM   #1
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L.I. vs. Tephlon

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Old 06-27-05, 10:21 PM   #2
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Old 06-28-05, 11:27 AM   #3
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8 Lines? good job you checked, fucker no showed last week

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Old 06-30-05, 04:37 PM   #4
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ill smash your herb crew, even you can get hit
kid, im hitting R.A.W so much
..........................ur mom will get pregnant
dickriding my ass. i dont need it so fuck that suck-up shit
i got a bullet proof cock the way Tephlons all over my dick
get out of my way. you bout to get passed
and thats a wrap....cuz saran all over ya ass*
this kids connected to herb lines, aim for dope, wont hit one
you cant plug into tight bars thats wire gonna lose this one**



* saran wrap wordplay...cuz saran = cuz i ran
**wire = why your
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Old 06-30-05, 05:07 PM   #5
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I'm all up IN-Destructable emcees causin erosion an fixin you're Name
'Cause ya 'Limited Edition' flows .......are just livin a 'Dream' Like GAME
You pre-approved Lame... with 'mic checks' but wheres the Cash?????
I aint even gotta throw a punch, cuz when you swing..
........................................Ya get knocked out from the Backlash.
rhymes like whiplash, get ya spine broke an you'll wanna Sue-me
but on the court, you dropped the ball....
.................................................. ..quicker than hittin puberty!
ya played style aint nothin new-to-me, you just catchin a whoopin
your like an obese street fighter..always bitin...never pun or Hookin
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Old 06-30-05, 07:00 PM   #6
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Up for votes..and sorry for changing my custom title Tephlon...

EVERYONE MY CUSTOM TITLE WAS. "Pre-Approved"

Just so you get his "personal".
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Old 06-30-05, 10:18 PM   #7
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This battle was fuckin ass

Punches...ima have 2 go with Teph on this 1..
they were lame..but less lame than L's

Metas...teph...no need 2 explain

structure..Li...even tho that was fucked 2
tephs was jus worst....

Open/Closers...Li...had a witty open and close

creativity......Teph

overall..this battle was horrible

Li your a vet...i exspected more
maybe u thought ya opponent was
weak so u aint have 2 drop hard
but he got u in this battle...

and i dont even like Teph..but he got this 1

(Nuff Said(*
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Old 06-30-05, 10:54 PM   #8
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vote- L.I.

ill smash your herb crew, even you can get hit
kid, im hitting R.A.W so much
..........................ur mom will get pregnant
dickriding my ass. i dont need it so fuck that suck-up shit
i got a bullet proof cock the way Tephlons all over my dick
^^
for two personal name flips... none of teph's punches were directed at L.I. like that back lash punch, maybe if L.I. threw a punch and somehow got greef about it later it would be a personal but u just said that shit to say it... personal name flips beat out jibba jabba
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Old 07-01-05, 11:58 AM   #9
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ill smash your herb crew, even you can get hit
kid, im hitting R.A.W so much
..........................ur mom will get pregnant
7...wording cud be better, but this was still a fire line, comedy in there to which is good, disses should make people laugh.
dickriding my ass. i dont need it so fuck that suck-up shit
i got a bullet proof cock the way Tephlons all over my dick
4...i know ya been gone a while L.I. but you should know that any dickriding lines are played out.
get out of my way. you bout to get passed
and thats a wrap....cuz saran all over ya ass*
6...short and simple, decent wordplay in there, not too complex but still nice.
this kids connected to herb lines, aim for dope, wont hit one
you cant plug into tight bars thats wire gonna lose this one**
6...again a nice bar. the wordplay wasn't the best i've seen from you at all but still a nice finish to ya verse.

OVERALL: 23/40



I'm all up IN-Destructable emcees causin erosion an fixin you're Name
'Cause ya 'Limited Edition' flows .......are just livin a 'Dream' Like GAME
5...i wasn't feelin this opener, the set-up was aight, but the punch itself wasn't all that hard-hittin.
You pre-approved Lame... with 'mic checks' but wheres the Cash?????
I aint even gotta throw a punch, cuz when you swing..
........................................Ya get knocked out from the Backlash.
7...LMAO!!! personal on his user title was nice, and the 2nd line to the bar was funny as fuck.
rhymes like whiplash, get ya spine broke an you'll wanna Sue-me
but on the court, you dropped the ball....
.................................................. ..quicker than hittin puberty!
7...again!! dope bar with a nice bit of humour in it.
ya played style aint nothin new-to-me, you just catchin a whoopin
your like an obese street fighter..always bitin...never pun or Hookin
5...this was kinda gay!! a little too basic and the concept was a flip on a played concept.

OVERALL: 24/40



close battle here.....
i've seen better from both, especially L.I. i seriously expected you to walk this battle....no hate to you teph, but then L.I. came half-assed like he aint even tried....first line was dope, then came with a played concept....nice wordplay in the closing two bars but nuthin overly creative like he ya usually do.
teph, the opener and closer were pretty gay, nuthin hard hittin just mediocre shit, luckily you had the two fire lines which made me laugh hard in the middle, that is what won this battle..........the fact that you made me laugh more with ya verse....

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Old 07-01-05, 12:26 PM   #10
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Thanks Troop, PP AN Solo, i'll hit up yall battles in this tomorrow

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Old 07-01-05, 12:51 PM   #11
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ight L.I i qwas expecting alot more from u i was dissapointed man.....

teph u droppeds hard this is the best ive seen u drop i think... good job man

best lines from both:

L.I:

get out of my way. you bout to get passed
and thats a wrap....cuz saran all over ya ass
^^ decent wordplay


dickriding my ass. i dont need it so fuck that suck-up shit
i got a bullet proof cock the way Tephlons all over my dick
^^ was played but this was your best line


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Teph:


rhymes like whiplash, get ya spine broke an you'll wanna Sue-me
but on the court, you dropped the ball....
.................................................. ..quicker than hittin puberty!
^^ thuis made me laugh like a mother fucker

You pre-approved Lame... with 'mic checks' but wheres the Cash?????
I aint even gotta throw a punch, cuz when you swing..
........................................Ya get knocked out from the Backlash.
^^ another nice line lol

teophs two bars were better than L.I's verse so teph gets it i liked the way u switched the style in this aswell.....


L.I i want impressing next time man..

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Old 07-01-05, 03:53 PM   #12
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rhymes like whiplash, get ya spine broke an you'll wanna Sue-me
but on the court, you dropped the ball....
.................................................. ..quicker than hittin puberty!

VS

ill smash your herb crew, even you can get hit
kid, im hitting R.A.W so much
..........................ur mom will get pregnant
dickriding my ass. i dont need it so fuck that suck-up shit
i got a bullet proof cock the way Tephlons all over my dick


overall.. L.I. took this one, just came w/ harder punches

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Old 07-02-05, 10:37 PM   #13
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technically im still in this league so ill vote
teph i think ya verse was nice but ya punches were non existant
your opener and closer should set the tone for the battle and you started off bad and ended bad, your personals were more like statements

LI, i was digging ya wordplay alot, but ya personals were a tad bit basic
like that plug in line alot
overall you had enuff to win this
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Old 07-03-05, 05:53 PM   #14
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Thats 3-3......

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Old 07-04-05, 01:21 PM   #15
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TephlonI'm all up IN-Destructable emcees causin erosion an fixin you're Name
'Cause ya 'Limited Edition' flows .......are just livin a 'Dream' Like GAME
blah opener.....weak wordplay 5
You pre-approved Lame... with 'mic checks' but wheres the Cash?????
I aint even gotta throw a punch, cuz when you swing..
........................................Ya get knocked out from the Backlash.
alil weak setup and stretched second line, but made for a funny punch 6.5
rhymes like whiplash, get ya spine broke an you'll wanna Sue-me
but on the court, you dropped the ball....
.................................................. ..quicker than hittin puberty!
hah, this was ok 6.5
ya played style aint nothin new-to-me, you just catchin a whoopin
your like an obese street fighter..always bitin...never pun or Hookin
stupid last bar in my opinion 4

22/40


LI
ill smash your herb crew, even you can get hit
kid, im hitting R.A.W so much
..........................ur mom will get pregnant
decent wordplay.. but this mommajoke shithas been played since forever 5
dickriding my ass. i dont need it so fuck that suck-up shit
i got a bullet proof cock the way Tephlons all over my dick
decent wordplay but im not feelin the punch about it at all 5.5
get out of my way. you bout to get passed
and thats a wrap....cuz saran all over ya ass*
good wordplay again, this one connected alil bit 6/10
this kids connected to herb lines, aim for dope, wont hit one
you cant plug into tight bars thats wire gonna lose this one**
i liked this line best of ur whole verse... best word play in my opinion also 7

23.5/40


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