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| 2HarD2LoSe |
  
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2 | 28.57% |
| rush |
  
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5 | 71.43% |
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07-21-04, 08:48 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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spiky vs 2hard2lose
IP: 2B26 31C3
rules r
no d/r no crew no biting and etc.... u spit first check in 8:30 verse due friday befo 5pm |
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07-21-04, 08:50 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2B26 31C3
check in fo now
also need 50 post to vote aight peace |
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07-21-04, 09:01 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: EA56 91C1
check-in no limit lyrics?????????? aight then but this well be my 1rst
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07-21-04, 09:08 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2B26 31C3
lets go aight no beef
o yea 10 lines max aight lets go |
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07-21-04, 09:24 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: EA56 91C1
u wanna drop right now if so im down lol lemme no soon aight peace
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07-21-04, 09:58 PM
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#6
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: BE35 D96F
as long its b4 friday aight u can go at any time
so hurry up so i cn go |
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07-21-04, 10:50 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: EA56 91C1
aight rush ready to be crushed?
Rush lol im take u down and ima flush u down to the~sewer// ima take u down quickly cause when i joined~rb~there was~fewer~good mc's// but i give u respect for~tryin~, this like a street race and im in the jet~flyin// im dusting~u, u have no hope im owning ur flows so what u gonna~do?// come~back~? lol, i gotta better chance hittin j-lo and thats a~fact// why u choose me cause ur gonna get bitch slapped by my ~vers.// what u doin rappin vs me while holding a~purse?// my rymes are makin u~ill~want me to get the~nurse?// cause this time ur brains gonna~spill~, thats what u get for throwin a~fit// cause u got~hit~by a~flyweight~, stop suckin up to me this aint no~date// alright hurry n go cause my rymes are so sweet im gonna~faint// |
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07-23-04, 12:30 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 314D 5503
man look yo name is 2hard2lose but tha thing that hard u lose
was tying yo shoe/ my bad if i offended u cause yo dad didn't bother skool u on who u fin to lose to/ i was gone for a while but now i'm back but this this time i aint on tha attack/ my rhymes r mo clever cat cant u see i'm right bhind u fin to murk yo ass with a bat/ i see u tried and like that but when i see rhymes a baby couldnt did that/ i chose to rap against u fo practice god dammit/ to be honest i feel like a Kon Artest cause this is hardest battle i had to tackle/ see u a youngbuck so go back dawg and duck aight/ cause nigga u suck so why tha fuck u challenge me u should change to sweet pea cause is so easy to see it offends me/ so i'm done son this battle wasnt shit but a little spit/ started voting people aight need 50 post to vote or over 50 uppin fo vote now |
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07-23-04, 12:45 PM
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#9
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IP: 3240 794D
Weak Battle...
Punches- Weak on both sides.... 2h2l Flow- 2h2l Metas- Tie Multis- Tie Structure- 2h2l Originality- Niether Final Vote--- 2h2l comments--- weak battle.... elavate... rush... opener.. wat was that.. tie my shoe?... lol.... not much i can say Peep Battle N Vote Fair no hate http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136850 Unexplained vote... removed
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07-23-04, 03:36 PM
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#10
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: E9F9 4A3D
uppin fo some votes
need to win uppin fo some votes |
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07-23-04, 03:40 PM
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©Lyrical Masterpiece©
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IP: BEB6 7795
weak battle, fake ass emcees...dont use the fuckin /'s you look like faggots...learn how to throw harder punches and definitely elevate, this battle is to weak for me to vote on
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07-23-04, 03:55 PM
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New to RB
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IP: 5B1D C896
Weak, weak, weak.
Punches: weak, but 2h2l personals: weak, again 2h2l metas: neither multis: neither structure/flow: rush overall: 2h2l That battle was weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak. Seriously, elevate. Read other battles and see what really good battlers do, and then use your own concepts. Just write, and write, and write until you get better.
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07-23-04, 04:04 PM
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New to RV
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IP: E9F9 4A3D
Rush u had structure and a flow mega point fo u
u need change punches where they realy work and multis where as u needs to but still u did all right 7.5/10 2Hard2Lose i seen no punches but u had a better structure then him yo flow was weak u points fo that like Reaper said write and write until u get better 6/10 |
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07-30-04, 03:23 AM
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#14
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
diss was a weak battle
but i'll give it 2, 2h2l his structure was better n so was hi flow v/2H2L vote 4 my battles http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138259 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138229 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138200 thanx Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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07-30-04, 03:45 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: B31D 4975
2hard2loose
Rush lol im take u down and ima flush u down to the~sewer// ima take u down quickly cause when i joined~rb~there was~fewer~good mc's// No, flow's terrible but i give u respect for~tryin~, this like a street race and im in the jet~flyin// im dusting~u, u have no hope im owning ur flows so what u gonna~do?// Blah, filler, still no flow come~back~? lol, i gotta better chance hittin j-lo and thats a~fact// why u choose me cause ur gonna get bitch slapped by my ~vers.// WACK! what u doin rappin vs me while holding a~purse?// my rymes are makin u~ill~want me to get the~nurse?// Neh, you suck cause this time ur brains gonna~spill~, thats what u get for throwin a~fit// cause u got~hit~by a~flyweight~, stop suckin up to me this aint no~date// alright hurry n go cause my rymes are so sweet im gonna~faint// Haha... bushwack yourself in the head That verse ^^ yes that one, was utter shit.I know your new, but keep working on all aspects of battling. Rush man look yo name is 2hard2lose but tha thing that hard u lose was tying yo shoe/ my bad if i offended u cause yo dad didn't bother skool u on who u fin to lose to/ pfft, name flip could of been better i was gone for a while but now i'm back but this this time i aint on tha attack/ my rhymes r mo clever cat cant u see i'm right bhind u fin to murk yo ass with a bat/ Blah i see u tried and like that but when i see rhymes a baby couldnt did that/ i chose to rap against u fo practice god dammit/ vocabs horrible, 'baby couldnt did that' did you mean 'could of'? to be honest i feel like a Kon Artest cause this is hardest battle i had to tackle/ see u a youngbuck so go back dawg and duck aight/ cause nigga u suck so why tha fuck u challenge me u should change to sweet pea cause is so easy to see it offends me/ so i'm done son this battle wasnt shit but a little spit/ Flows retarded, battle/tackle line could of been flipped better.All the lines after it though, sucked dildos Structures unco, some meta's... but weren't used effectively, the battle/tackle line being a prime example.Up your vocab & your wording V/Rush;argh you both sucked, but Rush gets my vote. Follow my links & do your thing |
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