i kno ya'll missed me well im back well neva left jus havent posted in open mic..2 busy battlin faggot's like intensify effect n shitya'll like my old shit than ya'll should love dis new ish holla back n leave feedback peace


Intro...

if sum1 came up 2 me n asked wut would i think if i was a respected artist or if i wasnt....
id tell'em like eminem-"i dont give a fuck"n 2pac-"fuck the entire world"cuz "i dont give a fuck
wut u think"-raw killa

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i took u in when ya time was hard/
u broke da trust n left me scars/
got me floatin in smoke n drownin in drinks/
tlk blasphemy but i dont give a fuck wut u think/

verse1

jus like u im livin life lookin 4 a break lookin 2 survive/
2 niggaz 1 in da same/caught in da game jus tryin 2 stay alive/
do wut we can 2 stay out of bein behind bars struggle n strive/

since high school when been breakin rules concellin tools/
not those dat build but take n threatin lives fools/
keep walkin mind ya business b4 u end in ya own blood pool/

made a pack sort of like m.o.b but it was niggaz b4 bitches/
neva let a chick come between our dreams of countin riches/
if sum1 disrespected left'em sew'n up wit stiches/
young thugs sweatin hard in hells kitchens/
handlin snitches caught switchin fuck those snake bitches/
its me n my niggaz against da world fuck u all bitches/

causin a rukus smokin forties n drinkin blunts/
fuck i mean drinkin 40's n smokin blunts/
abusive 2 woman? naw we jus abused they cunts/

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verse2

times change and we get older n as time goes by we grow apart/
da light dat once shined grows dark da bark became a bite/
shit switches n first comes da bite than da bark/
it went from havin my back 2 showin a spark lightin up da dark/
2 minds who thought alike now corruption fills ya heart/

i took u in brought u in 2 a world goin from rags 2 riches/
u went from a virgin 2 livin lavish n fuckin bitches/
i took u from poverty 2 pullin da switches so we evade da po-po/
now u so-so tlkn shit behind my back n hangin wit snitches/

a dawg now grown into a snake fuck it throw ya childhood away/
aimin a gun 2 my temple/while i finish writin my mental way/
sittin on dis swing on da "grounds" we use 2 "play"/
look wit disgust at my back stabbin demon as i walk away/
damn nigga i neva meant for our lives 2 end up dis way/
but when u a snake in da jungle its da crime u pay/
u can love us/n luv us/or hate us/n cross us/
but fuck wut u think dats all i got 2 say/

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I feel you all the way on this one right here...fuck tha hataz who say we wack homie...shit was dope...holla

thanx nigga yo im still uppin dis shit do not sleep on dis hot shit leave feedback n no fuckin hataz wun luv

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THOUGHT IT WAS DECENT LIKED THE liked the 2nd verse more had better content n seemed ta flow well so issues with the rhyme scheme in verse 2...were they both written by you?...in audio i think ya might've been able ta pull off some of those rhymes but its harder in text...was this supposed ta be audio? overall i liked your idea's but you lacked a little on vocab....i honestly don't think it compares ta your stuff i've commented on b4....but still nice job..keep it up killa

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left...2 many herbs

if i can evr get da right equipment i would like 2 do audio but now im jus stuck wit text.......n yes i wrote da whole thing.....i write my own shit all da time homie peace nigga uppin dis shit

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ayt rv im sick of u people sleepin do wut ya supposed 2 n leave feedback......i kno a quick 5 minutes of ur time cant hurt u....uppin for feedback.....as many fuckin peeps view a thread should equal how many replies it has naw ya'll 2 lazy..wake up n return da favor wun luv peace out holla back

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nice shit man...

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Nice, but damn man ur sucha douchebag, Ill battle you and murk you BITCH CHECK IT

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look homie u dont kno who u challengin.....y record may suck but there's reason 4 dat n they dont have 2 do wit me suckin.......cuz of hataz n dick ridaz u a newbie i show u fuckas respect so dont come on my thread tlkn shit n tlkn big i shoot ur small asses down....thanx 4 da repies holla back jus real replies no hatin bullshit....u wanna call me out post da thread in fuckin bitch slapped dummies

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i actully thought it was preety good....
honestly best i've ever seen from u word up and i actully give u props for it....

flow decent... vocab lackin, creativeness average but sorda deep, and it was da first verse or open mic i actully read all tyhe way through.... N thats being honest...

6.7
keep droping like this N u might start evelating.... open mic wise thou.....

thanx 4 ur *kindness* but I.E. we kno i got i skillz already way elevated over u n open mics n battles

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ayt rv quit sleepin on me im always givin feedback for u people quit bein lazy n return da fuckin favor shit peace

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damn, this was dope as fuck, u wanna do a colab remix cause i feel the same way, HOT SHIT

sure homie hit me up through pm if u wanna do a remix holla back nigga wun luv thanx 4 da feedback peace

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