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Mentalz
The Topical Juggernaut
 
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Pensive vs TheSinnister

IP: 36BB D5EA

Battle Rules: 10-20 lines.
Topic: Liquid Dreams

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Mentalz
 
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.. Time roams until the night sews ..
Our might condoned into a light home
.. As fright owns everything we vision ..
From thoughts .. To nocturnal emissions
To verbal incisions w/ vivid dimensions.

.. Internal wishes caked with a fate sealed ..
So forgo the real world & escape to unreal
Retake the wheel.. As we unravel times spool
For minds schooled & ruled to a space,
Where irate taste is the basis for distaste.

.. Drink the murk of hate, or be that state ..
I'm talking'.. Face to face w/ something innate
Contemplate race & entwine ya' mind at the seams
.. As your cortex pours the means across ya’ core ..
Across the beams as sleep explodes a liquid dream.
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Silence futile words Kill my frailty inside
Darken fearful eye , Without a sound he fights to sleep Alright
Liquid Dreams drown out his life,Goodbye Will power, and pride
Now he creeps in humans tears, when they sleep ,they will fear
Fluent Liquids everywhere, My inner side, lies chants dispair
In this place nothing near, No controll no way to steer
Come look into the mirror of dreams and face the agony...
Cast into the pit of reprisal within your mind, not me
Brooding gloom is everywhere, I'm mixing my blood with chemistry
Is this illusion not of this world but a dream within a dream?
As i float to extacy The depth of reality inceases as it seems
The ground is so far but the sky's out of reach
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