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Old 12-26-05, 02:31 AM   #1
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Championship Match: 1. N.Tavarez vs. 2. Natural Killa

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Old 12-26-05, 09:03 AM   #2
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Old 12-28-05, 12:45 AM   #3
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Old 12-28-05, 12:46 AM   #4
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Spittin' wack,consistently..you must have an obsession with it,son
Cuz your style is so "dim"..it makes depression look like fun
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Old 12-28-05, 09:55 AM   #5
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You "Cola" a bitch ya wife ........... I just show the tramp how Abortions Feel
Cuz Da way she Mountain Dews, U'd think she signed a Damn Endorsement Deal
 
Old 12-28-05, 11:04 AM   #6
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mountain dews/ mounting dudes
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Old 12-28-05, 09:36 PM   #7
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NK, not the best...the concept was not too played but the delivery was a little basic and the wordplay shit was forced.

N.Tav....same with you, not the best. Delivery was better than NK, although your wordplay was forced to....no need for the explanation either cuz I got it. But your punch was a little more creative and funnier.

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Old 12-28-05, 10:53 PM   #8
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i have to say....nk, you've dropped way better than this. your wordplay didn't really come through. On the other hand.....N.Tavarez had a funny line, creative, although the wordplay didn't need explenation.

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Old 12-29-05, 03:25 AM   #9
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why did you feel the need to word your bar so it was stretched and less hard hitting, v/ hot
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Old 12-29-05, 08:12 AM   #10
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yeah i know i didnt need the explanation, the bar looked funny to me
kinda rushed it. good battle, i'll rtf on break
 
Old 12-29-05, 11:27 AM   #11
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kinda close battle......... not really that good of a battle tho..... both were kinda forced, altho Hots seemed alil less...... his also was kinda funny....

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Old 12-29-05, 01:14 PM   #12
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V/ NK

Damn This Was a Hard Decision But I Think That NK'z punch was a little more direct and original but Nice battle
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Old 12-29-05, 01:17 PM   #13
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N.Tavarez was witter.

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Old 12-29-05, 03:20 PM   #14
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eh..

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but both coulda been worded better to hit harder.
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Old 12-29-05, 03:21 PM   #15
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v/NT i actually thought his was funny and shit...
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