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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 08:30 PM

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Complex Illness has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 08:31 PM.

Complex Illness has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 08:34 PM.

Now if Skillz was based on Sharp urs is duller
This Dude so dumb he put Phatinum as his Font Color
Imma Killa nigga and this Kids on Patrol
No askin for votes dogg and its me 5-0 on da Poll
Now im killin u dont talk shit like that Again
u Dont kno me Ill spit somthin so hot ull be chokein to send
Such a White boy sayin he live in da ghetto flip da bird
Man this kids So whack hes the 1 who made up the word

phatinum has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 08:57 PM.

yo im on the epire state and you doing jumping jacks tryin 2 los som weight i dont go dat way im a straight thuggin i aint gay dis is a 3style on da turntables ill break your jaw till you get disabled im able to take da illness nigga you cant feel dis im still dat rookie and u dat bitch wid da 4 inch pussy u a wossey ill crumble you like cookie new generation puming blood round impationt u a nigga dat need help you pull shit off 4 a boi like belt liking you lips watchin 50 move his hips u a lil nigga who got a mental illness im talking shit but im doing as much as i can while i spit

Voted For: Complex Illness

Both Verses Were Wack... But This One Wins Because He had better structure and had punches that hit....

the other guys punches didnt connect, flowed decent but need harder punches... plus i recognize the way you rhyme pussie in your other battles... with cookie pussie and rookie... anyway...

my vote to the guy it says on top.. peace

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Voted For: Complex Illness

Battle Verse 1
What the fuck was that?....u had NO structure at all...u didnt have a flow at all, as i didnt know when ur lines were supposed to end...no multis...no wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...

Overall
neither had multis...Battle Verse 2 had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 2 gets my vote...

VOTE - BATTLE VERSE 2

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Voted For: Complex Illness

he won

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Voted For: Complex Illness

JC DEFINET LY COPD DIS BATTLE FA SHO!!!

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Voted For: Complex Illness

Sorry dude but Im gon have to give this one to
Jerseyz Champ

his punchlines were just knockin him out even though both were good
His flow was heavenly and
his wordplay just killed him
Very good battle

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