(Verse 1)
yo, lets git it down 2 tha nitty-gritty/
a hustala, or Lil Kim wit each 1 of her bitty- titties (ha ha!)/
Jehovah's Witnesses worship tha grounds i walk/
Christians wanna slap my mouth soon as i open up 2 talk/
seein all tha glares when i walk thru a crowd/
hearin all tha mothers screamin their lungs out loud/
the strain on my shoulders, i dont know wut 2 say/
who tha hell mite i accidently offend 2day?/
sketchin my name out with an inkless pen/
feelin sick 2 my stomach, will i ever rap a fuckin gain?/
only way i can communicate is thru Morse Code/
my voice exposed 2 motherfuckers all around tha globe/
trampled on by motherfuckers askin 4 an autograph/
askin for my advise on coke, bitch im off of that/
my lifes just another tragicomedy/
fulla ups and downs wut more do u want from me/
i aint got no money, no drugs, or no cars/
i aint nuttin 2 brag bout neither, im no pornography star/
i cant even rap, my shit is whack/
prolly cause im so high offa the coke and smack/
but for now i just wanna b remembered/
from new years day, all tha way until december

(Chorus)x2
(yo im Eyvon)
no trailor trash, just rhymes so sick/
(yo its Eyvon)
ill shoot u out so dont give me lip/
(ya its Eyvon)
i aint gonna git nasty so just sit down and shut up/
(cause im Eyvon)
cant u tell i just dont give a fuck?

(Verse 2)
spillin propane all over Cleveland city/
then light a match, this shit it such a pitty/
tthe shit i go thru 2 git my revenge/
collectin drugs, but losin friends/
im at a crossroads, a fork in tha street/
flippin every single motherfucker i meet/
ha, i guess im just a fake who makes over a mill/
just a poser slut who's rhymes is all ill/
im tha center of attention, in gossip, a bitch/
yet im all over TTRL's most wanted list/
so baby, wut u gotta say 2 cash?/
but u 2 poor, u cant even afford 2 kiss my ass/
ill hire a henchman 2 come and hunt u down/
put a gat 2 ur head and spill ur blood on tha ground/
so quit pretending like u can dis me/
ima white female rapper, but i aint bout 2 git prissy/
a million lawsuits filed at tha thought of my name/
so i kill 3 bouncers and put em all 2 shame/
so just remember its E to tha Y to tha V-O-N/
once u fuck wit me i can guerentee tha world will never c u again!

(Chorusx3)

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

lol man you need some help yer stucture is wack lol vocab is what you need flow was ok 4 storyline 5 lol vocab 2 peace 3/10

HahA

I love that spit chick
Heh

hehehe just hit me back w/ that offer, Nice drop Uppin'

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ya, ima workin on it. ill hit yall back when i git somthin REAL together....

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

uppin 4 feedback!!! hey check out mah battles 2!!!

http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=144861

http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=144137

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

LOL I critiqued this other rhyme she had (and trust me, this one is even better than that other crap she spit) and she wanted to start bangin' her head against her computer screen typing out b*tch and ho and slut like a mad woman.LOLOLOLOLOL But what can we expect from a stressed out female internet gangsta who is more than likely typing her "hard knock life" battles from her Mommy and/or Daddy's computer?

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Aluta Continua.. Victory is certain!

Neither link is valid. I was looking for that battle verse you probably spent 4 days preparing for me. Note: I have not even written anything and do not at all intend to. I will simply keystyle and remind you to respect your more lyrically inclined elders.

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Aluta Continua.. Victory is certain!

it was wack shit you suck bitch dont put yo self down...

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SuperG

did u get ma pm bout ms.skillz4daze

It seems like she's already sent pm's to a good few people about this "battle" she has set up for me. *shaking in my boots*
On second thought though, maybe I should just write Dr.Seuss rhymes. Seems like she could use the confidence boost. *wondering if this charity is tax dedutible*

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lol wack shit no ofense lol

well it was wack lol

needs to elavate peaceout 3/10

i liked the hook and the first verse, atleast most of the first verse...but some of it was a lil hard to follow...second verse sunk way below the first verse's level...didnt flow, no vocab or wordplay...but keep droppin gurl!! just elevate a lil bit...5/10