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Old 12-22-04, 02:45 PM   #1
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Nostradamus Vs. BigChase Vs. The MC (3 Way Battle)

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This is the final's!!

Everyone Must Check In Before Friday!!!

No Excuses!!

Verses Due Monday!!!

Topic: Ignorance

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Old 12-22-04, 07:32 PM   #2
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*happy tone*
I'm Elemental Soul if u didn't know.
Good Luck to the both of u.
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Old 12-22-04, 10:18 PM   #3
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Message To The Reader: u dont have to do this, but if u want the best effect on my peice, then scratch one of your arms and do not stop scratching it until u finish reading it. you will understand why im telling u to do this when u reach the last bar.

In this colorless planet,slaughtering becomes a habit,
Rain keeps my tears from being seen,like pink rabbits,
Looking into shattered mirrors,the young man cries,
Im shedding golden tears from my bloody blue eyes,
AIDS infected players,inseminating dead seeds,
Save neglected prayers,desinegrating testies,
Decelerating technology,to prevent this planets obiesity,
Treat the streets equally,so that we can live peicefully,
Poverty stained,parralel lanes that leave us sellin caine,
Then they got the nerves,to blame it on a GTA video game,
These trains have no tracks,so i can never find a balance,
I can not get mates, like Australians with no accents,
They hate me cuz im ugly,i don't belong in the in-crowd,
So i scream silent glory, yet my whispers are so loud,
Peer pressure made me turn into a gangsta for respect,
Benevolence couldn't intercept,evil nails would inject,
My skin,for it seemed to reveal my inner flesh, taped up,
Crying myself to sleep,sticky cheeks when i wake up,
Pillow soaken wet from my tears,backstabbed in the past,
My gangsta friend found out i was rocken red flags,
Throwing up gang signs and cutten class,yellin out brrrat,
So he got mad,and threatened to jump me, but why do that,
He stole my chicago bulls hat, and wrote his name on it,
I vowed for revenge, so depressed with fury,i would vomit,
Drinking n sniffen coke,smoking blunts to cure my sorrow,
I told my nigga the whole story,"meet me early tomorrow",
So i cut school the next day so i could meet up with him,
He showed me something out his pocket,that made my head spin,
It was a small gun,he said"my nigga, you gon' get ya vengeance",
At that point i was down for it,fuck messin with learnin lessons.
I was nervous but excited, i wanted to kill my ex best friend,
Just to watch his life end,who fucken cares if i end up in the pen,
Shoot him after school,and get my hat back was my mission,
I wanted to leave my old past behind,and enter hells kitchen,
I was an idiot,stuck in the darkness,just mer-ci-less,
Then on my way to complete my mission,"its not worth-it-kid",
At the end of the tunnel i found the light,i could feel cries,
I almost sense god's presence,i began to realize,
I turned to my nigga,and told him to call this all off,
He said its all good,he understood instead of callin me soft,
Then i spoke to my O.G. and told him that i wanted out,
Dropped my flag, i felt free like a short kid,who found his sprout,
This true story, is an example of people's ignorance,
And how the world is coated with poisen, and belligerence,
See some are plain evil,but others like me,were just stupid,
Im one of the very few,that over came pain thru music,
Just don't get caught up in our brainwashed humanity,
Cuz if you do,u'll regret it when its too late with fatality,
Then u'll begin to notice that you can't spark your light,
Because the nails of ignorance have scarred your life,

-Bite Your Nails...in other words,Peace to All...and Goodnight-
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Old 12-22-04, 10:26 PM   #4
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hahaha, damn man, very nyce piece, it was all true, and i also liked the ending , much props
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Old 12-23-04, 06:31 AM   #5
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Fuck.. I didnt even look to see this lmao.. Aiight, I'll key something up soon..

This is my check in.
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Old 12-23-04, 03:04 PM   #6
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this is my check in....but why the played topic???? blah....
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Old 12-26-04, 01:06 PM   #7
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Ignorance - By Nostradamus..

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Topic: Ignorance.


What is power..?
.....Is power telling people what to do?

.....Or making people believe a lie is true?

Shiiit......Deceitful power.. Were all a victim..
So just accept it..
Look, Check it..

...I wrecked it, a happy world I never belonged to..
Where blissful ignorance, was the start of my song que..
I’m on you..........Like a pack of wolves shredding skin..
If anything, I’m living on the edge of what’s wrong too..
Its not cool, to marginalize the few compared to many..
The truth is their pretending their spending is worth a penny..
I’m pending, on people to wake up & smell the ass..
Their being served every day, its not that~much~to~ask..
I passed the front page, filled with war on iraq..
...Its bizarre how the coalition got that far..
...So dark & conspiracy theories jus sort of erk me..
Its perfect, the way it fits in, lies are bursting..
See firstly, we started off with fire at eight..
Didn’t take long, TV turned the crooked finger straight..
But wait.. Who’s Osama and do we even care?
Pardon me, isn’t he, the son of a billionaire?
The owners of oil stations, explain this situation..
I’m patiently waiting, as the bush administration..
Is handing a statement.. On a TV station..
Of corruption, concocted in a Whitehouse basement..
I’m pacing.. Damn this shit just sounds easy..
America go and slaughter their asses, don’t displease me..
Indeed we.......Need to support the cause of war..
...Caught in doors, of freedom, bleeding, no remorse..
Ofcoarse, we like a good show, the media supplies..
Repetitive footage, simply feeding ya with lies..
I advise you check the facts, before going back to sleep..
In fact I think, we needa take look behind the scenes..

...
“And on the news today.. It seems the general masses are controlled by the government through fear.. Always being told their in a ‘War On Terror”.. Is it all a scheme?”
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Or a dream? Sometimes it makes me wonder, & pose..
Has anyone begun to, look under own nose..
See the day of the attack, just might have been scripted..
A revolution........A war effort to end a mission..
I’m wishing its not true, but the world just lit up..
Were in war now, alert, don’t shut the fuck up..
News bulletins, Anthrax grips the whole nation..
So vacant, the threat, and yet we still face it..
Its crazy, plain and clear, right where the planes hit..
How almost all the victims of 11 was the public.
Above it, we saw a jet burn the pentagon..
...A section in renovation.. Nobody was harmed..
And umm, what ever happened bout the other 2 jets..
So tragic, they only fucking killed the passengers..
I’m passionless, to find a reason to claim co-incidence..
For instance its, g-men protecting their innocents..
Am I making sense? Were just pawns, dispensable..
Not memorable, important or worth a mention too..
Anybody who’s got a big plan too control you..
So dude, do as I do, and un-cover the truth..
Be an asshole, and here’s the quote so don’t forget it..
“You can live how you like, just never be Ignorant..”


..In other words, Peace everyone, and goodnight..
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Old 12-26-04, 11:20 PM   #8
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BTW, If you dont understand the message I'm giving in my lyrics.. Then dont vote.

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Old 12-26-04, 11:29 PM   #9
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haha, i really like dis verse, it's like the why version but accept your answering his question's lol.. damn, u seriously are better then me
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Old 12-27-04, 07:54 AM   #10
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168474

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Old 12-27-04, 08:42 AM   #11
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My REAL rap name is BACK!! anyways dabatos, whos gonna vote on this 3-way battle? everyones out of the tournament but us three, are we gettin like people from front lines to vote or elite lines or sumthin?
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People from elite front lines..
Just got to wait and see if chase drops..
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Old 12-27-04, 05:30 PM   #13
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I seriously don't think that chase will drop after reading both of your verses lol....
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Old 12-27-04, 05:31 PM   #14
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My REAL rap name is BACK!! anyways dabatos, whos gonna vote on this 3-way battle? everyones out of the tournament but us three, are we gettin like people from front lines to vote or elite lines or sumthin?


finally your back.. i got a way to get ppl to vote, jst wait.. I'll post somethin in L.L.
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Old 12-27-04, 05:49 PM   #15
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i will edit this wit my vote in a little bit... both very good verses though... should be a close one
 
 


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