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A.M.O.K 0 0%
Cerulean 5 100.00%
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Old 07-31-04, 07:20 PM   #16
A.M.O.K
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Old 08-01-04, 02:21 AM   #17
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
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Voted For: Cerulean



I expose foes & throw em in a aybss of blackness
How funny, found your Family Tree is the Root to wackness,
6/10
A win?Can't hav this, chances are slimmer then paper
& against me, you'll never see it like a German rapper,
6/10
I'll smack ya, till your innards split & you piss yourself
& your gay, hang off boys ass more then pants w/ no belt,
6/10
If skills were wealth, then your rhymes homeless clearly
So poor infact it seeks assitance from the Salivation Army,
6/10
Blah that was wack, never thought I'd stoop so low
Go on Suvivor though.... on here?you'll see no vote,
5/10

Kid's goin AMOK battlin me, went hyper and shat his diaper
A lyrical case of A.D.D., control yaself and u might flow tighter
6/10
Judging by ya name I bet you go wildin out straight crazy
But even if ya words were charged ya'd still not ever "faze" me
6/10
Responding to my challenge u treadin a really thin line AMOK
Ya ego vs. my brains is balancin an elefant on a hammock
7/10
Spendin hours thinkin up watery lines prolly gives this dude a kick
My own style comes naturally, its findin empty threads thats tha trick
6/10
Think you spit sick? Wait till I've awoken my sleeping demon
I would "punch" you physically but ya bowel's too full o semen
8/10
Ya think your styles insane but "illness" is somethin ya never endured
So Imma striaght rack ya mindgrain till I got this case of "AMOK" cured
7/10

this came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay and complexity and vocab
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Old 08-01-04, 03:54 AM   #18
Cerulean
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thanks man, now that's what i call a real vote!

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Old 08-01-04, 05:10 AM   #19
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
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Voted For: Cerulean

Cerulean
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay is tight...most of ur punches connected...personals were good...

A.M.O.K
structure is good...flow is also on target...nice multis...wordplay was ok, some of it i didnt like though...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
A.M.O.K had more multis...both had a good structure...both had stable flow...Cerulean had better wordplay...as well as more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Cerulean gets my vote...

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Old 08-01-04, 03:40 PM   #20
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uppin for more votes please!
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Old 08-03-04, 05:45 PM   #21
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uppin 2...
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Old 08-03-04, 10:03 PM   #22
M-Eazy
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From: Mackamento
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Voted For: Cerulean

i liked your style and all around flow...amok needs to elevate to get onto cerulean's level...cerulean came out wit the flow from intro to out and made my jaw drop in every line...good battle, keep praticin
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Old 08-03-04, 11:12 PM   #23
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amok needs to elevate to get onto cerulean's level

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Old 08-03-04, 11:24 PM   #24
BrOTheRP.A.R.A.
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Voted For: A.M.O.K

i give it to this guy because he had more rhymes and better flow and it sounded better easyer to understand what he was talkina bout holla

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Old 08-05-04, 01:19 AM   #25
Cerulean
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hm... more votes please! ^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Old 08-05-04, 01:24 AM   #26
TeamOne
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From: Chitown
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Voted For: Cerulean

ok u got him....... neither of yall were great, but i like Cerulean usin his name and his lil story up in it........ and 4 AMOK's lines didnt really rhyme, so thats y i didnt give u the vote.........but no hatin on yall....... ohh yea, and he sed no racist lines and u used one AMOK....... w/e its coool....... and spread the love to my battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ht=FuxJustAWord
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