IF YOU CANT RESPECT THE GAME THE GAME AINT GONNA RESPECT YOU//
SPIT AT THE GAME THE GAME WILL SPIT BACK AT YOU//
NIGGA I AINT AHEAD OF YOU IM MILES PASSED YOU//
TREAT YOU LIKE A BLUNT LITE YOU UP AND PASS YOU//
STEP CLOSE TO THAT BOY TIPS YOU GONNA FEEL THE TENTION//
AND DID I MENTION//
BOSTON IS WHAT IM REPPING//
DRINKING MCs LIKE HEINIKENS IS WHAT IM QUENTION//
YOU GOT NO MIC LOVE YOU GET CUT OUT THE SESSION//
I GRIP MICS TO PROFESSION//
CUZ IM THE NICEST ON THE MIC DEVICES//
NOT ONLY IS 16 BARS OF MINES WORTH LOOT BUT TO ME THERE PRICELESS//
NIGGAS IS FEATHER WEIGHT//
GET YOUR THOUGHTS STRAIGHT//
SHOTS TO YOUR CHEST WILL MAKE YOU LEVITATE//
ON THE STREETS IM KNOWN BUT IM REAL REAR//
GAS YOURSELF LIKE YOU SUPERMAN MEMBER HES IN A WHEELCHAIR//
IM KNOWN TO LEAVE PARIPALEGIC//
I MEANT IT//
COCK MY SHIT BACK AND SQUEEZE IT//
YOUR WIFEY AT THE CLUB THEN THATS WHO I LEAVE WITH//
CUZ ITS NO LOVE MAKEING STRICTLY BACK BREAKING//
TENANTS ON THE FIRST FLOOR ASKING EACHOTHER,"WHY IS OUR TV SHAKEING?"//
I LIKE MY BITCHES YOUNG DUMB AND DOPE//
LIKE ME TO PULL THERE HAIR AND SHOVE MY DICK IN THROAT//
NO GAG REFLEX//
SEX ON NO X//
IF MY MANS AND THEM ARE THERE I WANT HER TO ASK WHOS NEXT//
CUZ IF I HIT IT WE ALL IT THATS THE WAY IT GOES//
NO CONVERSATION JUST TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES//
ONE NIGHT THATS ALL IM LOOKING FOR IM NOT CALLING YOUR PHONE//
ONLY IF EVERYTIME YOU PICK IT UP YOU TALKING THAT YOUR IN MOOD TO BONE//
COME ON OVER//
SUCK ME OFF THEN BEND OVER//
IM LIKE DEAN MILENKO IN THE BED ILL PUT A BITCH IN THE TEXAS LEAF CLOVER//
SO DONT HATE THE FLOW JUST RESPECT IT//
BEFORE I TREAT YOU LIKE A BAD CELL PHONE CALL AND YOU GET DISCONNECTED.......NIIIIIICCA......1

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

yo this shit was ok. the structure was bad and the spelling was too. Up the vocab, rhymes were good. Aight peice overall

holla back at mine
THE SICKEST OF SICK

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good 2k id appreciate some more feed back......1

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

Microsoft Word---> Tools---> Spelling and Grammar Check.

Repeated use of words is annoying.



Feel me?

Structure was crazy ugly, work on that a bit for sure. Theme was ok, Flow was ok. Keep it up.

Peace.

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Blow It - Topical

LOL.. agreed.. excessive overuse wordplay.. ~~nuff said

And fuckin take caps lock off.

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Blow It - Topical

I just tryin ta' get my post count up though truthfully.

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shit was ok.
just work on spelling and grammer and you'll be alright/