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Old 08-11-04, 11:07 AM   #1
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sum thing i worte

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Baby, remember how you used tell me that you loved my rugged image,
But now we cant communicate, well ya cant go past the line of scrimmage
You said that you wanted me, but baby I let you down, and gave ya frown
Baby I was so immature, baby if I was a king I’d give up ma crown
Just to be with you, babe I would kill just to spend a night out with you
Must be n I luv,I never felt this way, I guess in this case my love is true
Just tell wat can I do, we chose our separate paths,, that cancel out each otha
Trust betrayed , by your click ,cuz sum financial shit, now we sperated foreva
But lemme tell you before I’m gone, I wanted you, yo soul baby just you
Out of all the girls I would sleep I want you, spend time, puff dimes wit you
But sadly the tides of time pushed u out of the way, I dreamed of makin luv
To a beautiful blonde, but for now its so long, god gimme or take me above
Through you departure, every second was hell, and finally it rings a bell
That I should stayed ahead of the game, not play lame, now I’m cursed
I wouldn’t mine knowing, that if I don’t get you,tomorrow I get hearsed
Well now I tryin tell you how I feel, but you say I cant cause of groups
So now I stay home a lot, boardin on fruity loops, slagin n playin hoops
But I want you, but if you don’t want me I guess that’s to bad, cause my life
Is worthless piece of trash, I struggle to get by, but it would be better by yo side
Just wanted tell you, girl your special, I want you back , don’t need money
Hopefully you miss me too, at if I’m gone maybe your eyes will get a lil runny
Sayin damn that best boy I’ve been with, hje actually gave a fuck about me
But ii just wanted you to know that your worth a universe without you honey
Yo girl I want you to let me touch your chest and so I can get you heart back
Yo body ,your mind, your soul is like greater then Venus, a true art artifact
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Old 08-11-04, 11:08 AM   #2
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i know its fucked up, but wtv
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Old 08-11-04, 11:18 AM   #3
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Old 08-11-04, 11:46 AM   #4
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wtf
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Old 08-11-04, 12:48 PM   #5
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if i'm wack then dis me,
but no answering will piss me
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Old 08-11-04, 01:23 PM   #6
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its cool just work on flow wordplay you use lots of emotion which is cool if you mix it with some imagination

check my open mic

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Old 08-11-04, 01:25 PM   #7
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nice jus elevate a litle
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Old 08-11-04, 01:39 PM   #8
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your titles all fucked up
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Old 08-11-04, 01:58 PM   #9
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lol i know you can do better
i see ya shit in original
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Old 08-11-04, 02:15 PM   #10
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thanks,i will peep all yuor stuff, and ruff tuff thug your an idiot, i can str8t freestyle better then you when i was 10 and i was shit and you really suck.
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