hey sup mutha fuka ur so gay
all ladies get scared wen u come out in da day
ur old gf looked like ur grandama
she was 6 feet undaa
u think ur so thug
u sit at home and drink from ur mug
ur rhymes they suck
ppl wudnt even pay a buck
dude u shud give u rapping u dont rap
u just sound like crap
u shud seriously wrap this up

thug i still have a tiny bit of respect left for ya, but must be a reason everyone hates u. Dude i aint hatin but ya gotta change ya ways.

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k man first that was weak lol 3/10
wordplay 3/10
flow 6/10
punches 0/10

tlkn bout people givin up rap u should...dat looked like sumtin vanilla ice's son wrote bitch u tlk shit bout a crew member u get through me pussy

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This is utter wack..

& If you dont leave a link . . to a Open mic you have Replyed tooo I will close this.

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Not quite legendary yet....

that has got to be the wackest shit that i have ever read you really need to step your game up for real

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hahahahaha,u hjust clowned youself you fuckin shit head,