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Old 08-01-05, 03:15 PM   #1
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Old 08-01-05, 03:26 PM   #2
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Listening.

Pretty decent beat, flows well, the fast part is dope, on point decent quality.

Lyrics were straight,

pretty decent man.
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Old 08-01-05, 03:31 PM   #3
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already told you bout this....

all three of you ropped it, the seconed guy shined on it the most in my opinion, reminded me of bone thugs n harmoney.... your part was real nice, flow was on point lyrics were decent overall solid drop man...
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Old 08-01-05, 04:31 PM   #4
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listening as i type:

beat not soundin promising...its a bit simple but nice in a way not sure its cool...first bredda is nice..likin grimeyness of his voice..delivers his shit nice...lyrically average...hook is kinda simplistic...well mixed tho...2ND MC....DAMN nbredda sounds on some bone-thugs n harmony type shit..kid wud sound dope if he went into a propa quick flow...whats his sclick plz?....Jet u kinda still have that effect on your vocals cos ur voice cant sound like that naturally...lyrically decent...flow is str8...delivery is kinda meh...likin tha adlibs they're working well as dus tha fade into tha hook...

nice track yo...dloading to ipod...got like 400 songs on tha thing now lol

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Old 08-01-05, 10:28 PM   #5
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hook - simple.. but it works.. like it..


First verse - thought he slurred his words.. he needs to try a lil harder in getting his words clearer.. but flow was strait.. lyrics were strait.. not bad..

second verse - my personal favorite.. flow was on point.. lyrics were good.. pretty decent.. feelin it.. gj here

third verse - It felt lie it was short.. but it was sweet.. short and sweet kinda.. flow was strait.. lyrics were aight.. i thought you might have gotten a lil more complex than you did.. but it was strait.. solid verse ...


overall i thought track was decent..


by the way.. beat was aiight
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Old 08-01-05, 11:18 PM   #6
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yea decent track overall yea flow is alot more consistant these days just needs polishing like errrybody's keep it goin jet!
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Old 08-02-05, 12:07 PM   #7
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laid back beat....i would spit to it....

Hook:..pretty str8...cant complian

Flow...fast...lol...

1st: slurred words a lil
2nd: loved it...he can spit fast real good
3rd: pretty str8...yu sounded like yu had ya eye scrunched while yu were spittin...its a lil short....

i could see this on a CD...if yu had the rest of it complimentin this song.....

good job...i like it
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Old 08-02-05, 01:43 PM   #8
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bets not my style.... mhook is ok.. very souf style.... first verse slirs quite alot needs to learn to annunciate better... flow fits beat lyrics are ok very commercial.... second bre drops is nice for da track cant complain bout skills.... but jus too commercial.... flowin well ur delivery is on point real short verse./.... not my style track but decent for wat it is.... keep it up
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Old 08-02-05, 03:12 PM   #9
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pretty dope man seriously, ur voice is better than before , sounds better, beat is funny lol just simple, chosur is pretty cool, pretty nice verse man
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Old 08-03-05, 12:23 AM   #10
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listenin..
flow is fast and sounds pretty dope man, im definatly feelin this
delivery is raw, fits the joint nice
hook is aight, not bad
2nd verse is fast and dope also.. nice shit, equally skilled with other cat
good track man, im definatly feelin this joint
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Old 08-03-05, 03:49 PM   #11
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hook- aight. simple nothing too special but does some justice.

verse- rushed flow at points, sometimes you can't hear what you saying.

verse2-best verse

verse3-this voice don't fit on the beat, shortest beat, too much extra stuff added to your voice (echos, double-reverbs or w/e)

I listened to some more tracks on here. you must be the guy with the high pitched voice (verse3), no? Well, keep at it.
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Old 08-03-05, 06:11 PM   #12
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soilid hook i like it

verse one needs to try and stand out more ya kno

2nd hot shit right there real good

3rd decent flow good lyrics not bad

overall good shit i liked it

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Old 08-04-05, 12:19 AM   #13
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simply put?

Creative but common? hmmm how can i explain....everyone talks about messed up thoughtz but u did it in a different way plus the beat is slow so i guess it blendz? hmmm what else quality is good hell better then minez ahahha so i cant complain at all about that so good job keep it up
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Old 08-04-05, 07:53 PM   #14
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it straight you got the right idea but if your gonna do something like that make it more twizted
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Old 08-25-05, 09:48 AM   #15
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i gotta say i'm not audio jus yet but ne tho da beat seems real simplistic i would spit ova it, hook was basic but it seemed 2 work, tha 1st guy had a nice steady flo i liked it at a fast tempo but slurred a lil bit of words which fucked it up, tha 2nd guy was gutta on it he did have a bone thug vibe goin on real G'd up...& u CarsonJet i gotta say ur verse was real short but i guess since it was 4 soundclick u should save sum of ur good material fa sho word keep ya head up & droppin dem hot azz tracks gea ...~1~LUV~1~THUG~
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