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08-02-04, 08:34 PM | #1 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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new shit uppin 4 feedback
IP: C12B 6450
i submit subliminal messages through my cockyness,every time rounds shatter ur cartolidge's,lyrical punches collapse ur esophguase,gettin slapped wit 8 arms wit each 16 bars like i was half octopus,u niggaz dicks n nuts so small 2 see'em u need binoculars,my dick been i mo bitches mouths than canker sores
people say i self glorify myself actin like im better than dem,but i dont need 2 self glorify ya'll do it for me wit ya ignorance n arogance & then,niggaz get mad cuz my nigga rapes da paper when he fucks a pen,"oh he's white he cant say nigga he doesnt fit in",clouded by sin,countin my losses as blinded wins,cuz promise if i was 100% black u niggaz would b feelin me then representin breathless aressting mindscapes,haunted by hates,surrounded by fakes,lets b honest half u fuckas,nuttin but straight suckas who couldnt sell a album if weed came inside wit they tapes,n they lyrics scream when attacked n begin hollarin rape,cop ya cd's jus 2 use as paper weights im not sayin im da greatest,or fuckin rap godest,im jus bein honest,my bad 4 bein a lil 2 modest,lotta rappers here act like they da hottest,but in my lyrics u see da startin flames like i set fires wit my rhymes cuz im a lyrical arcinist,rap has changed its different now n every 1 wanna b artist i could give a shit if u respect my flow,u can love me our hate me but i gotta make dis doe,talkin like ya'll kno,but ya'll faggots will neva kno who da fuck i amso jus respect it hoes,b4 i make nets outta ya clothes,wit burn marks n blood stains clingin 2 da holes,niggaz like damn wut u gotta do dat 4 2 many screws in my head loose,dats why im crazy wit rhymes when up in da booth,speakin crazy but tellin da truth,,im sick of explain i got nuttin 2 prove, jus like if i shoot myself 2marrow so i aint got nuttin 2 lose,so is life or death decisions 2 difficult 2 choose,n i swallow,da sarrow wit a bottle of booze, hop in my car wit da empty bottle n go 4 a cruise,crash n kill 2 innocent people now im left wit tickets n lawsuits n a horrible bruise,so which do u think dat i choose?
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VOTE IN THESE SLEPT ON BATTLES N ILL RETURN DA FAVOR WIT HONEST VOTES Last edited by raw killa : 08-02-04 at 09:44 PM. Reason: misspelled words n missin words |
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08-02-04, 08:40 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 4391 3AD8
"people say i self glorify myself actin like im better than dem,but i dont need 2 self glorify ya'll do it for me wit ya ignorance n arogance & then,niggaz get mad cuz my nigga rapes da paper when he fucks a pen,"oh he's white he cant say nigga he doesnt fit in",clouded by sin,countin my losses as blinded wins,cuz promise if i was 100% black u niggaz would b feelin me then"
truer words are never spoken...nice drop dawg Im feelin it for real. check out my new open mic "Why Do I Do It" |
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08-02-04, 08:42 PM | #3 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: C12B 6450
ayt nigga thanx 4 da love
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08-02-04, 08:56 PM | #4 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 014A 66B0
c'mon rv give me yo replies peep dis truth at work holla back uppin
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08-02-04, 09:32 PM | #5 | ||||
the girl people love to hate
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i like it. i like ur style too:
"my nigga rapes da paper when he fucks a pen." that was hot
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08-02-04, 09:45 PM | #6 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 014A 66B0
thanx janedoe 4 da feedback c'mon people uppin dis shit 4 feedback^^^^^^^^^^^
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08-02-04, 11:29 PM | #7 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 014A 66B0
all ya'll on rv need 2 seriously stop frontin n not jus read a thread but leave feed back 20 peeps viewed dis yet only 5 replies 2-3 from myself uppin u niggaz n niggets is lazy i swear i leave feedback in everything i look at n dats a lot of shit so return da favors
thanx uppin dis bitch^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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08-02-04, 11:34 PM | #8 | |||
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IP: 19F7 7629
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139209
^^ feed back if u havent already.... but this was sick point blank the aggression was fire the lines was well put together, creative everyline was slick sorda a deep topic in a way but pure sick in my eyes... hella drop kid.... 9.8 outta 10 its fire..... |
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08-03-04, 03:53 AM | #9 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 28AD 5545
I liked it alot,,and you made some good points,,,the structure was nice as well
I give you a 7 out of 10....But it doesn't matter what I think,,Its what you think,,,but I do like it,,,God bless all...1 I NEED SOME FEED BACK PEOPLE.....http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139368
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none |
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08-03-04, 04:12 AM | #10 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
rofl quit man i wasnt feelin it tha structure looked like u writen a fuckin book
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08-04-04, 01:00 AM | #11 | ||||
New to RB
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IP: C2FE 1710
i thought it was pretty decent...u made some true points..keep it up
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08-04-04, 01:03 AM | #12 | |||||
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Wasnt Feelin It Niether, And Why You Say Nigga So Much, I Dont Care, But It Just A Filler Word When Rapping And A Pointless One At That
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08-04-04, 01:04 AM | #13 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: 13BC F2ED
ty 4 da feedback people except virtue nigga u jus mad i got skillz betta than u da rest of ya'll ty 4 da love ill return da favor holla back peace out 1 luv ya'll uppin 4 feedback
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08-04-04, 04:34 AM | #14 | ||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5510 817C
^^rofl ok lets battle then if u got so much skill fuckin homo u sad quit man
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08-04-04, 04:59 AM | #15 | |||||
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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your way honest in this dawg
IP: 88E6 6CAA
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^^koo closer overall killa this was a good piece dawg i liked reading this..nice work..7.5/10 ya had some serious agenda n shit ta get off ya shoulders it seemed n i liked the way ya did it...don't sweat the haters dawg.... looking for feedback on this shit... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139167 topical:200 posts http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138359 me vs gran..chi |
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