20 Lines...That Okay?

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231352
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231345
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231356
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231337

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Yeah, that'll work

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231344
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231356
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231341
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231350

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And we have a No-Show.

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I'm keyin it up right now...give me a few mins

sorry for the delay

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all good...good luck homie

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U must reeeally wanna be champ.

Yeah...either ur stupid, or ya pride is just gone...
'Coz after 15 battles, most people would think it's time to move on
Damn, what a mean mouth...u're just rude as fuck...
Forreal...I'll have to knock those teeth out, if u don't stop usin 'em
All that shit talkin doesn't tend to sound right....
When u get power-ranked below me in the mag u helped write
I'm quite shocked at all of the lies u try to tell...
How u gonna break MY balls, when u only bust a nut by yaself?
And no wonder u can't get no pussy penetration...
Jenna Jameson saw the size of ya loss column and got intimidated
U got no originality, no depth...I bet u rap like 50...
I used to use ur style, 'till I found out they weren't laughin WITH me
Last week was a breeze...a muh'fuckin cruise...
But I see Ace did a good job...of showing the talent level of ya crew
If people here respect skill, then u geeks are hated...
But we do know what ya'll are good for...so at least the name fits
U dropped heavy. Dunno if LBL can take the weight...
'Coz they're gonna have to pull A LOT of ropes to elevate ya rank
If people wanna see u advance, I'll be shocked, fool...
'Coz my last champ match was close, 9 votes...............ur's got 2


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Your a Bitch for lettin Butler fight your battles, One Moment Pause...
Lama don't respect you, only way you'll B-Boy is if you grow some balls.
Who ever gave Shake a Mic, it's time for smackin the editor.
Got nuffin In Store for me, besides the Cash in the register.
You bitch about votes, ngga Tav sonned you, didn't I breakdown.
Voters ain't gotta have the Feds 'round, just to have Shake Down.
Leave your Neck strained, ngga you suck plus your throat is sore.
I ain't got the Belt YET...
So I'll have to Tear that Ass up with your Vocal Cords.
& Best of all, I could blow a gasket, Bitch your not an asset.
Want your style to be one of a kind...
You should kill umm...Fracture, Aloe, Resin, Butler, & maybe ClasSick

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All that shit talkin doesn't tend to sound right....
When u get power-ranked below me in the mag u helped write
I'm quite shocked at all of the lies u try to tell...
How u gonna break MY balls, when u only bust a nut by yaself?
U got no originality, no depth...I bet u rap like 50...
I used to use ur style, 'till I found out they weren't laughin WITH me
If people here respect skill, then u geeks are hated...
But we do know what ya'll are good for...so at least the name fits
U dropped heavy. Dunno if LBL can take the weight...
'Coz they're gonna have to pull A LOT of ropes to elevate ya rank

hmm.. this was a pretty close battle. i quoted the same number of lines in each verse. seems like ya'll should've dropped less and shit. both did good and had pretty solid verses. i liked rell's cause of the wittiness he had with it. some good wordplay, but some shaky wording. shake, some good shits. more of a personal verse than rell's(imo). good lines, some nice concepts and good wording. pretty hard decision to come to. even though rell did his thing, i still think shake may have edged this one. really thought both could've had a bit more to each verse.

v/ shake

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0-1 Shake

F u c k a f i f t e e n c h a r a c t e r s.

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Your a Bitch for lettin Butler fight your battles, One Moment Pause...
Lama don't respect you, only way you'll B-Boy is if you grow some balls.
Shake's Concepts are DOHpe man - The dood is Pure.
Yea I said DOHpe...Cause half his crew has used them before.
You bitch about votes, ngga Tav sonned you, didn't I breakdown.
Voters ain't gotta have the Feds 'round, just to have Shake Down.
...Zula your a Butler Nut Rider - Plain & simple, no Mental Blow.
You Stay on His dick, Shake Zula I guess it's true, Cups cover Genitals.
Leave your Neck strained, ngga you suck plus your throat is sore.
I ain't got the Belt YET...
So I'll have to Tear that Ass up with your Vocal Cords.
& Best of all, I could blow a gasket, Bitch your not an asset.
Want your style to be one of a kind...
You should kill umm...Fracture, Aloe, Resin, Butler, & maybe ClasSick.

vs

Yeah...either ur stupid, or ya pride is just gone...
'Coz after 15 battles, most people would think it's time to move on
All that shit talkin doesn't tend to sound right....
When u get power-ranked below me in the mag u helped write
And no wonder u can't get no pussy penetration...
Jenna Jameson saw the size of ya loss column and got intimidated
Last week was a breeze...a muh'fuckin cruise...
But I see Ace did a good job...of showing the talent level of ya crew

Really good battle in my eyes... Rell camepretty hard/consistent on all punches... some of the wordplay went a little overboard but its the style. The personals we're witty and harder than shakes... and the cup covers gentials was lol funnny. Solid verse overall

Shake started off really good but shit got fillerish @ points... and other than dissing me... the personals we're just kinda stating shit really especially the closer. Opener was really funny though. Good shit but it seemed like some of the lines we're just there to match the line limit

Vote - So Rell

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"Only god can judge me, but I'm atheist so you do the math..."

so rell

Who ever gave Shake a Mic, it's time for smackin the editor.
Got nuffin In Store for me, besides the Cash in the register.

Shakes a B-Boys Legend you swagger jacker, man torn.
Your style is a Mix, DJ's can't even get their Hands on.

Can those Raps...You Butter Face, Oily skin, I'll test it all.
Shake Lives by the Gun, but he'll prolly die by High Cholesterol.
& Best of all, I could blow a gasket, Bitch your not an asset.
Want your style to be one of a kind...
You should kill umm...Fracture, Aloe, Resin, Butler, & maybe ClasSick.

nice verse. some forced shit tho

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shake

Yeah...either ur stupid, or ya pride is just gone...
'Coz after 15 battles, most people would think it's time to move on

All that shit talkin doesn't tend to sound right....
When u get power-ranked below me in the mag u helped write

And no wonder u can't get no pussy penetration...
Jenna Jameson saw the size of ya loss column and got intimidated

^^lol ha

U got no originality, no depth...I bet u rap like 50...
I used to use ur style, 'till I found out they weren't laughin WITH me
Last week was a breeze...a muh'fuckin cruise...
But I see Ace did a good job...of showing the talent level of ya crew

U dropped heavy. Dunno if LBL can take the weight...
'Coz they're gonna have to pull A LOT of ropes to elevate ya rank
If people wanna see u advance, I'll be shocked, fool...
'Coz my last champ match was close, 9 votes...............ur's got 2

damm shake got mad personal nothing creative too much like shake usually is..but the flow and personals were killer.. juss felt his verse was more fluid then So rell...so rell was more creative but he missed more..shake hit more ...nice battle

vote-shake

Wow...
Your a Bitch for lettin Butler fight your battles, One Moment Pause...
Lama don't respect you, only way you'll B-Boy is if you grow some balls.
---------NAW

Who ever gave Shake a Mic, it's time for smackin the editor.
Got nuffin In Store for me, besides the Cash in the register.
---------OK

Shake's Concepts are DOHpe man - The dood is Pure.
Yea I said DOHpe...Cause half his crew has used them before.
--------------COOL BUT A LIL TOO SIMPLE

You bitch about votes, ngga Tav sonned you, didn't I breakdown.
Voters ain't gotta have the Feds 'round, just to have Shake Down.
---------------------COOL

...Zula your a Butler Nut Rider - Plain & simple, no Mental Blow.
You Stay on His dick, Shake Zula I guess it's true, Cups cover Genitals.
--------------NAW

Shakes a B-Boys Legend you swagger jacker, man torn.
Your style is a Mix, DJ's can't even get their Hands on.
------------------EH

Leave your Neck strained, ngga you suck plus your throat is sore.
I ain't got the Belt YET...
So I'll have to Tear that Ass up with your Vocal Cords.
-------------------HUH NAW

This Mans slow, Your Fan Base doesn't support you Damn bro.
A Bitch tried to Crowd Surf at his show & Ouch That's "Land Ho."
------------------------------HEH.. COOL CONCEPT BUT ITS AWKWARD WORDING

Can those Raps...You Butter Face, Oily skin, I'll test it all.
Shake Lives by the Gun, but he'll prolly die by High Cholesterol.
----------------------HAHA

& Best of all, I could blow a gasket, Bitch your not an asset.
Want your style to be one of a kind...
You should kill umm...Fracture, Aloe, Resin, Butler, & maybe ClasSick.
----------------EH.. THIS LINE IS REALLY FUCKIN LONG LOL

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Yeah...either ur stupid, or ya pride is just gone...
'Coz after 15 battles, most people would think it's time to move on
-----------OK

Damn, what a mean mouth...u're just rude as fuck...
Forreal...I'll have to knock those teeth out, if u don't stop usin 'em
----NAW

All that shit talkin doesn't tend to sound right....
When u get power-ranked below me in the mag u helped write
-----------------HAHAHAH

I'm quite shocked at all of the lies u try to tell...
How u gonna break MY balls, when u only bust a nut by yaself?
---------------EH.. COULDA BEEN COOL BUT NAW

And no wonder u can't get no pussy penetration...
Jenna Jameson saw the size of ya loss column and got intimidated
------HAHA COOL

U got no originality, no depth...I bet u rap like 50...
I used to use ur style, 'till I found out they weren't laughin WITH me
------------NICE

Last week was a breeze...a muh'fuckin cruise...
But I see Ace did a good job...of showing the talent level of ya crew
-------------EH

If people here respect skill, then u geeks are hated...
But we do know what ya'll are good for...so at least the name fits
-----------------HUH?

U dropped heavy. Dunno if LBL can take the weight...
'Coz they're gonna have to pull A LOT of ropes to elevate ya rank
------------HAHA..OK

If people wanna see u advance, I'll be shocked, fool...
'Coz my last champ match was close, 9 votes...............ur's got 2
----------------------EH


SHAKE JUST HAD BETTER PUNCHES AND MORE OF THEM

VOTE = S. ZULA

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ghoulies

Your a Bitch for lettin Butler fight your battles, One Moment Pause...
Lama don't respect you, only way you'll B-Boy is if you grow some balls.
Shake's Concepts are DOHpe man - The dood is Pure.
Yea I said DOHpe...Cause half his crew has used them before.
You bitch about votes, ngga Tav sonned you, didn't I breakdown.
Voters ain't gotta have the Feds 'round, just to have Shake Down.

vs


Yeah...either ur stupid, or ya pride is just gone...
'Coz after 15 battles, most people would think it's time to move on
All that shit talkin doesn't tend to sound right....
When u get power-ranked below me in the mag u helped write
And no wonder u can't get no pussy penetration...
Jenna Jameson saw the size of ya loss column and got intimidated
Last week was a breeze...a muh'fuckin cruise...
But I see Ace did a good job...of showing the talent level of ya crew


vote - Shake.

his punches hit harder.

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