This will be the first verse in my next audio track
called "It didn't have to be" Its a song about teh 8 friends ive lost to death in the last 18 months. The beat ive chosen is by jedi mind tricks. The song is called "Animal rap" Not the AG remix, the original one. If you have it i suggest you play the beat while u read. It will help you see where im going. Hit me up with feedback. This is a special one. Really close to the heart.


peace
BMUSE





I’ve already lost the war but I battle every day
Finding myself slayed form the plans of worldly ways
I stand her dazed raw still from the reaction
Of your game of pick and choose as you commit your evil actions
On my knees I’m asking, why it had to be this way
I wonder if to you its just some game you like to play
I used to pray, I thought faith would show me light
But instead it took the sun away and replaced my days with nights
And so I fight, just to live another day
I struggle through the memories and the words they’ll never say
Through the fact they, couldn’t stay long enough to hear goodbyes
Through the sound, of hearing each and every of mother cry
And At night I sleep, I attempt to numb the pain
And struggle to hold on to the memories you drain
My Tears stain my pillow, and my visions stain my mind
Like I’m supposed let it go forget it all put it behind
I will not hide behind what some will never feel
My heart has been removed and replaced with one of steel

some great imagery here, some great one-liners as well.

I used to pray, I thought faith would show me light
But instead it took the sun away and replaced my days with nights

^thats an ill little couplet

you just need to up your vocab a little, you kept rhyming the same words in places, dont be another 50 cent.

and keep posting.

lol upin
i just wont say anythuing about that one

alright i re did this a tad and ill have the full song up tonight untill then peep this if u have time