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05-05-03, 07:17 AM | #1 | ||||||
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BMUSE - It didn't Have to Be
IP: A704 ACA3
This will be the first verse in my next audio track
called "It didn't have to be" Its a song about teh 8 friends ive lost to death in the last 18 months. The beat ive chosen is by jedi mind tricks. The song is called "Animal rap" Not the AG remix, the original one. If you have it i suggest you play the beat while u read. It will help you see where im going. Hit me up with feedback. This is a special one. Really close to the heart. peace BMUSE I’ve already lost the war but I battle every day Finding myself slayed form the plans of worldly ways I stand her dazed raw still from the reaction Of your game of pick and choose as you commit your evil actions On my knees I’m asking, why it had to be this way I wonder if to you its just some game you like to play I used to pray, I thought faith would show me light But instead it took the sun away and replaced my days with nights And so I fight, just to live another day I struggle through the memories and the words they’ll never say Through the fact they, couldn’t stay long enough to hear goodbyes Through the sound, of hearing each and every of mother cry And At night I sleep, I attempt to numb the pain And struggle to hold on to the memories you drain My Tears stain my pillow, and my visions stain my mind Like I’m supposed let it go forget it all put it behind I will not hide behind what some will never feel My heart has been removed and replaced with one of steel |
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05-05-03, 09:01 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 7C9F 2C4F
some great imagery here, some great one-liners as well.
I used to pray, I thought faith would show me light But instead it took the sun away and replaced my days with nights ^thats an ill little couplet you just need to up your vocab a little, you kept rhyming the same words in places, dont be another 50 cent. and keep posting. |
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05-05-03, 01:51 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: A704 ACA3
lol upin
i just wont say anythuing about that one |
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05-05-03, 08:01 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 02CD 5BB4
alright i re did this a tad and ill have the full song up tonight untill then peep this if u have time
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05-05-03, 08:24 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: FF98 53B8
I’ve already lost the war but I battle every day
Finding myself slayed form the plans of worldly ways I stand her dazed raw still from the reaction Of your game of pick and choose as you commit your evil actions ^^^^my favorite lines , and johnnyfeet its a soft drop so he dont have to use vocab ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,overall u get a 7/10,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,keep spittin ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=44162 Last edited by Bash : 05-05-03 at 08:28 PM. |
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