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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
A.M.O.K | 0 | 0% | |
Cerulean | 5 | 100.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-31-04, 07:20 PM | #16 |
Flyweight
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IP: 70B9 DA4C
Rise
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08-01-04, 02:21 AM | #17 | |
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
Voted For: Cerulean
I expose foes & throw em in a aybss of blackness How funny, found your Family Tree is the Root to wackness, 6/10 A win?Can't hav this, chances are slimmer then paper & against me, you'll never see it like a German rapper, 6/10 I'll smack ya, till your innards split & you piss yourself & your gay, hang off boys ass more then pants w/ no belt, 6/10 If skills were wealth, then your rhymes homeless clearly So poor infact it seeks assitance from the Salivation Army, 6/10 Blah that was wack, never thought I'd stoop so low Go on Suvivor though.... on here?you'll see no vote, 5/10 Kid's goin AMOK battlin me, went hyper and shat his diaper A lyrical case of A.D.D., control yaself and u might flow tighter 6/10 Judging by ya name I bet you go wildin out straight crazy But even if ya words were charged ya'd still not ever "faze" me 6/10 Responding to my challenge u treadin a really thin line AMOK Ya ego vs. my brains is balancin an elefant on a hammock 7/10 Spendin hours thinkin up watery lines prolly gives this dude a kick My own style comes naturally, its findin empty threads thats tha trick 6/10 Think you spit sick? Wait till I've awoken my sleeping demon I would "punch" you physically but ya bowel's too full o semen 8/10 Ya think your styles insane but "illness" is somethin ya never endured So Imma striaght rack ya mindgrain till I got this case of "AMOK" cured 7/10 this came down 2 harder punches and better wordplay and complexity and vocab
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08-01-04, 03:54 AM | #18 | |
Light Weight
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IP: 5C3E 0FF3
thanks man, now that's what i call a real vote!
MORE VOTES PLEASE
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08-01-04, 05:10 AM | #19 | |
Moderator
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
Voted For: Cerulean
Cerulean structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay is tight...most of ur punches connected...personals were good... A.M.O.K structure is good...flow is also on target...nice multis...wordplay was ok, some of it i didnt like though...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall A.M.O.K had more multis...both had a good structure...both had stable flow...Cerulean had better wordplay...as well as more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Cerulean gets my vote... VOTE - CERULEAN |
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08-01-04, 03:40 PM | #20 | |
Light Weight
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IP: C354 3622
uppin for more votes please!
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08-03-04, 05:45 PM | #21 | |
Light Weight
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IP: C354 3622
uppin 2...
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08-03-04, 10:03 PM | #22 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0C21 21F5
Voted For: Cerulean
i liked your style and all around flow...amok needs to elevate to get onto cerulean's level...cerulean came out wit the flow from intro to out and made my jaw drop in every line...good battle, keep praticin |
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08-03-04, 11:12 PM | #23 | |
Flyweight
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IP: AC52 6776
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rofl Rise |
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08-03-04, 11:24 PM | #24 | |
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: A.M.O.K
i give it to this guy because he had more rhymes and better flow and it sounded better easyer to understand what he was talkina bout holla Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-05-04, 01:19 AM | #25 | |
Light Weight
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IP: C354 3622
hm... more votes please! ^^^^^^^^^^^^
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08-05-04, 01:24 AM | #26 | |
FuxJustAWord
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IP: EECF 4742
Voted For: Cerulean
ok u got him....... neither of yall were great, but i like Cerulean usin his name and his lil story up in it........ and 4 AMOK's lines didnt really rhyme, so thats y i didnt give u the vote.........but no hatin on yall....... ohh yea, and he sed no racist lines and u used one AMOK....... w/e its coool....... and spread the love to my battle: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ht=FuxJustAWord |
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