Check.

Votes:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2494103

__________________

check in.

This is school and you the nerd im the bully...Ima blokk his lokka
Take ya around 9 years to get to me like degrees for a docta.


Explanation
tried to come original against him.and if ya didnt know-it
takes around that many years to get a degree to become
a docter.

Well here we go again.

It's always heat, boy bands or school to flip my name and attack me
That's 3...
...same number of sites I've seen your bar worded exactly

__________________

good fake bar lol...nah j/p good shit

1. how was that bar fake. 2. your bar was garbage 3. V/9th

__________________

My Lines Are ILL yo

Vote: 9th Degree.

v/9th Degree...

V/9th....his hit harder....but Cezar ur's wasnt bad....

__________________

Voted for 9th Degree

Cezar you tried to come original, and the setup line was real nice...I liked it, but then when it came to the punchline you just went weak, the delivery was weak and the fact that you took it to a different place than what your setup would've suggested made it even worse.

9th didn't have the best bar, it made me laugh a little but its a punch that's been used so many times before, but then, when you think about it, what punch hasn't been used many times before. So yeah, good bar....fuck talking about played concepts anymore because everything is played nowadays.

Overall, 9th had a more comical and wittier punch and Cezar, your's was just half-and-half, next time try to make the punchline relevant to the setup.

V/ - 9th Degree

__________________

V/ 9th degree..

A stronger punch.. & made me laugh.

v/ 9th dat was a nice punch

__________________

Evo's Myspace

E.C- Untitled

This is school and you the nerd im the bully...Ima blokk his lokka
Take ya around 9 years to get to me like degrees for a docta.
^^word of advice, if it needs explaining, especially if the explanation's longer than the actual bar, then the concept's either not worth using, or it needs much better wording. Anyway, this was ok, nothing special, kinda self glory

also, just taking bits of his name and using them anyhow, is not effective...the best thing is to incorporate his name or parts of it into a sentence that makes sense in the OTHER meaning (w/o his name) too

vs.

It's always heat, boy bands or school to flip my name and attack me
That's 3...
...same number of sites I've seen your bar worded exactly
^^again, pretty simple, but well-worded and was actually aimed at your opponent rather than self glory

v/9th

pz to both

__________________
Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel