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08-05-04, 08:57 AM | #1 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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uh here we go now (Yea).
i like it when gurls lean over here and dance/ it makes me feel like pullin down my pance/. i hope ya feelin me cuz i think im gonna get my chance/. i hope ya likin me cuz i think im ready/ its my first time so i hope yer nice and steady/ uh part 2 here we go now. im tryin to send a message to you/ i hope ya gettin it, cuz you aint no foo/. i realy do like it when you shake yer ass/ i hope you dont reply and say you pass/. if you do say that then ill be shut down/ and ill be home with a frown/ |
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08-05-04, 09:03 AM | #2 | ||||||
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP: A164 FAE3
lil 2 simple n short but good drop...work on structure,wordplay n vocab holla back
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08-05-04, 09:06 AM | #3 | ||||
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yeah but wut would i kno i got the same prob
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08-05-04, 09:09 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: C1DA C961
yo dawg nice drop u shud make it longa man make it a real song dawg good topic but work on vocab like Killa sed , uh god drop doe dawg keep postin n ill holla
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08-06-04, 03:09 AM | #5 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
ya plan on that i recorded it man but it needs to be longer
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08-06-04, 03:11 AM | #6 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
if you have heard lean back by fat joe thats the beat im using for it
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08-06-04, 03:29 AM | #7 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
thanks yall im starting to fegure out how to spit good rhymes my home boy on msn told me that i keep changing the story and that and i am starting to rap with a good style now i think ill have some good audio songs when i fiegure out how to get them on the soundclickt thingy
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