Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-06-05 at 11:28 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 09:58 PM.

Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-06-05 02:21 PM.

For A MomenT I Thought You was Gonna Duck me Man .....But I Knew you was better than That

No need to use tactics to match wits with a half shit already past bitch...
And rip your palms like Sunday's before easter to Catholics...
Lace you just for kicks or much less...
Murdered so many emcees i was Biggies and Pacs #1 suspect...
Stanza with a skilled flow? lets be real though...
Iam beat you today, tomorow you wont get up right like missed field goals...
Wreck imposters, tired of battling speech impaired neglected toddlers...
You've got nothing left to offer, running out like forgotful shoppers...
Hurtin Stanza who went from first to last in a flash, one thing im certain...
I'm strong enough to stop light, so you better be calling it curtains...

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

Voted For: Stanza

Yo I Hit You with 28 Punchez 14 Times so You feel 48 effects
Im Makin You Feel This In The Inside Like My name Was Sex
5...kinda weak...the punch was nuthin to do with the setup, it seemd filler, and usin his record that way wasn't all that good, you shud've used it some other way.
I Thought You Said You Was Leaving so Why Is You Back Bitch
I Guess Lickin all Them Asses Made you Talk A Whole Lot of shit
5...kinda funny. the punch was relevant to the setup but it was around a played concept.
My Bad Did I Hurt Your Feelings I meant to Say Lickin up to Dicks
Washing Chicken Wit Yo tongue is the only Time U ever Kissed A Chick
6...better, concept again is kinda played although not as much, bar was kinda basic and cud be worded better.
The Bars are comin Down to a End Like Twix Sitting In The Sun
I Bet If Someone Pulled out a Hotdog Wicked Would Open His Buns
7...werd!! LoL!!! this bar was funny...hot dog lines have been done before but not like this, funny ass bar!!
Define you?....Whenever In Conflict You Always Get Kicked In Your Ass
Always On a Niggas Dick So Thats How He gets His Ease Ghetto Pass
6...aight closer, you spelt his name out but it really had no effect with the punch, still good though.

OVERALL: 29/50


No need to use tactics to match wits with a half shit already past bitch...
And rip your palms like Sunday's before easter to Catholics...
5...weak opener, a nice multi in the opening line but the whole punch lacked any kind of real power.
Lace you just for kicks or much less...
Murdered so many emcees i was Biggies and Pacs #1 suspect...
4...GAY!!! hasn't anyone told you biggie and pac lines are played, and usin them both in one line is ultra played!!
Stanza with a skilled flow? lets be real though...
Iam beat you today, tomorow you wont get up right like missed field goals...
5...ok bit of wordplay in the second line, field goals concept was aight but not used that well.
Wreck imposters, tired of battling speech impaired neglected toddlers...
You've got nothing left to offer, running out like forgotful shoppers...
6...decent bar, a little multi, a nice setup with the punch although cud've been better, basic wordplay to but still nice.
Hurtin Stanza who went from first to last in a flash, one thing im certain...
I'm strong enough to stop light, so you better be calling it curtains...
6...again, decent wordplay, the rhymin was kinda basic....setup was relevant to the punch, overall an average closer!!

OVERALL: 26/50


average battle.....
both had some played concepts
stanza was more consistent with his punches....tried seplling the name for a punch but didnt pull it off, also the play on his record was weak.......one funny ass new approach to a used concept so that was ok......wicked one came too basic, threw in some multies, but lacked in punches and thats what wins battles.......

V/ - Stanza

RTF!!! dizzee rascal battle - links in my sig!!!

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Voted For: Stanza

good punchlines and rhymes by stanza wicked one had sum tight shit too but not many good rhymes

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Voted For: Stanza

Ima give my vote to stanza. Although this was kinda close battle.

Wicked One
Wordplay was ok
Structure was kinda outta order.
Lines were a bit stretched out
Punches were decent

Stanza
Wordplay was real good.
Opener was good also
He won this battle because his punches were more harder-pause-

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