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05-10-05, 06:11 PM
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Ill Nigga Alert.
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Dayum bruh............Nice Open Mic......Very deep, alot of emotion and creativity.....Overall 10/10....Good job manye...keep up the good work...
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05-12-05, 06:18 PM
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thanks for the feed everyone, appreciated.
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05-12-05, 06:44 PM
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Geaux Fuck Yourself
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very nice... I liked it alot... very very deep and I feel for your loss man.
Like I said, I liked the peace... your showing alot of improvement since NOK. 8/10
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05-13-05, 02:16 PM
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Odi et Amo
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Again, RIP to your friend and may she continue to live within your heart. Very strong piece packed with strong emotion. It's good to see you can write about something this painful, it's important to express what you're feeling in a situation like this. Kept it simple which made the piece more serene yet powerful at the same time.
Keep going strong
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05-13-05, 05:55 PM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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definetly this was "emotion" at it's best yo...what I liked about this most was the fact that you didn't cloud it with big words and over explain and examine your feelings, you said what you felt and laid it out on the table without beating around the bush...straight up I gotta agree with them that this is a 10/10 meyn...
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05-13-05, 08:31 PM
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Puttin MD On The Map
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this was some deep ass shit......i did aa piece about a girl i knew died......ima put the link in later but.....the emotion in this was off the chain.....i liked it it was very hearfelt and i can see you had some deep feelings for her.....so man...sorry to hear this happend...its never the best.....but good drop 10/10
feed on this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154893 its old thats why my structure is whacked
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05-13-05, 08:52 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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This was good... nice show of emotion and sad to hear what happened... It was very easy to tell how you feel without even reading the whole thing (though I did). I'm sure it came to you very easily... 8.7/10... Return the favor on "Past to Present"
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05-14-05, 06:56 AM
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wow...ive never read anything of yours before,but this was deep.Feels like you didnt even have to think when you did this,you just wrote what you felt.Sorry for your loss man,hopefully she in a better place.Stay strong,keep doin ya thing and keep writin like this.Im sure shed be proud of ya.pz
R.I.P
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05-14-05, 11:16 AM
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...Belong...
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Seriously because of the personal effect of this open mic...i'm feelin it 100% the loss obviously was great for you and you explained that well in this piece on a technical note the structure, flow, topic, rhyming are all peak performance material...i can see this as perhaps OM of the month...i remember i did an open mic for my Nan...you feel connected to the open mic piece personally...you're lucky this has had a decent response...and many condolences...
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05-17-05, 12:36 PM
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IP: 828D 0B7A
upppppppppiiiinnnnn yo.
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