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Voted For: Wes City

first off this was a reasonable battle from both.but only one cat can take the win and thats wes, firstly his structure & flow were more on point, but more importantly his punches were a lot more creative & original.
both cudve cum harder and tried sum personals etc, but still, the winner is wes

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Voted For: Wes City

You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
concept played...ok for an opener - 5/10
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
decent personal, flows aiight - 7/10
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
not worded right, gd concept tho -6/10
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
wackness...wordplay doesnt work.. - 5/10[B]
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
[B]hahaha dope bar, i aint seen that shit on Tv in tiime tho - 9/10
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
-_- doesnt really work fam....- 6/10[B]

Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
[B]meh @ a yo mama type bar - 6.5/1-
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
lol, gave me a chuckle decent..-7/10
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
wackness...teister bars r played as a mofo -5/10
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
decent, nuttin spectacular, flows well - 7/10
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
decent concept...decent nameplay - 7.5/10
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
solid closer....not original in concept bu well worked = 8/10

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Voted For: Kordozar

You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
^^OK.......5/10
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
^^Ok....coulda been better....4/10
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
^^Good....6/10
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
^^meh...weak....3/10
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
^^OK......4/10
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
^^no punch...horrible closer...1/10

OK...kinda boring verse man.1st punch was creative and hit well...and so did the 5-0 candle one.But the rest were just some mediocre punches.The closer was the worst...as it wasn't a punch.Work on your flow and set-ups.

Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
^^weak punch.....2/10
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
^^Uncreative....2/10
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
^^set-up was bad and punch sucked....1/10
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
^^terrible......1/10
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
^^Finally a good line....5/10
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
^^c'mon.....1/10

OK...too simplistic.You need better concepts.Look at that last bar....he puts you to sleep?...terrible concept..the only decent line in your verse was probably the kors-light one.The others were basic and weak.Work on your complexity and using more personals.

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Voted For: Wes City

Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
6/10


You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
5/10

v/Wes City... this was a very close battle, Wes had good punches that edged Kord out, both need to elevate, no hate

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