How can one day be so perfect and the next go so wrong
I guess it always happens so that I can write a new song
But, oh well, what’s been did has been done
I’m standing up sending praises to the Son
What? You don’t know Who He is, He’s Jesus Christ
What you think He was some kind of demonic poltergeist
He’s right the opposite, lives in heaven and is called superb
Declaring Him as anything less is nothing more than up surd
He’s the only perfect being, creator of the whole universe
He’s the only reason I even wanted to write this verse
He conquered death for everyone in the entire earth
So we might live with Him in heaven and have a new birth
Giving Him my soul was the best thing that I could have ever done
Cause in Him the true and final victory is already been won
I try and give Him all my problems and pointless fears
And pray that He will hold me tight and wipe away all my tears
He’ll do the same for you if just surrender all to Him
Come into His light and step beyond all that is dim
Let Him write your name in the Lamb’s Book of Life
And He’ll be there to take away all your pain and strife









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thanks man, uppin this




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thanks for the feed man, uppin this




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uppin this......




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7/10...............
liked the subject.
good flow..........................
god bless...................

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hey man nice drop good flow nice vocab......slow start strong finish keep progressin 7/10 return the favor on my open mic....peace

thanks y'all, uppin this




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I like this. Played Concept though. I liked the approach. You had good emotion. It was overall The best aspect in your verse "Emotion"...Imagery is good, i just say put metaphors and similies in it..To expand your imagery more complex and more "Deph" in it..But Nice drop.

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i like da subject, urs was on
but nice drop dough

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