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Old 07-22-05, 12:25 PM   #1
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Vick Slate vs Valor

IP: 0D11 88C9

Battle Rules: CREW BATTLE
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M.alicious M.ilitary M.entality
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Undestructable Emcees

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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Old 07-22-05, 10:20 PM   #2
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Valor has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-05 10:20 PM.
 
Old 07-23-05, 12:16 PM   #3
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Vick Slate has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-23-05 12:16 PM.
 
Old 07-23-05, 11:26 PM   #4
Valor
A Reflection Of The Past
 
From: inside your nightmare's
IP: 2029 97B3

Heaven
the painted sky's of the world, lights gleam through cloudy wholes
where angels laugh during day conversations, and rest there peaceful souls
where demons of the underworld, cry do to the lack of no freedom
where the lords most loyal spirits play, look closely you will see them
they are that sparkle in your eye, and that special kiss of sensation
the vivid thoughts in your mind, that give you that happy inspiration

that is where i pray, that my loving soul returns to on decision hour
hoping for a spot in heaven where the air is sweet, no where near sour
where evil is no where to be found, i am safe in thou saviors arms
cant help but to smile, at the fact that IM enjoyed by the great ones charm

but at this moment, heaven awaits holy and silently during my absence
not knowing if my soul is healthy enough to get in, we will see what happens
if not i shall be saddened, due to the fact i haven't got to enjoy gods presence
haven't got to set and speak with him, or except any of his life lessons

so i sat here on the porch, gazing upon the beautiful empty navy blue sky
i have all these questions that need answered, and i have not a clue why

Just to say that if one day I make it to that kingdom, I'll become a legend
another story told, for a young man, who on a glorious day made it....

to heaven
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Old 07-26-05, 10:06 AM   #5
Vick Slate
everytime i rhyme...
 
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From: West Va.
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did he make his due date?
if not i'm not wasting a good verse
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Old 07-26-05, 10:07 AM   #6
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Voted For: Valor

Other dude didn't post a verse....................
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Old 07-26-05, 10:22 AM   #7
Vick Slate
everytime i rhyme...
 
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From: West Va.
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Holy land fulfilled with angels and unicorns,
Eventually u have prayed to go there since u were born,
All mighty above that has our souls n love sleeps there,
Victorious over satan the national known reeper,
Evening falls people all over put their hands together to pray.
Now can u wash my sins away, so I can make it to heaven one day.


my vote goes to valor.....on the real I didn't try n didn't want to try...got bigger shitt going on
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Old 07-26-05, 10:53 PM   #8
Valor
A Reflection Of The Past
 
From: inside your nightmare's
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lol i dropped my verse 2 days before it was due you lame ass......uppiing for an easy win
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Old 07-26-05, 11:37 PM   #9
Dervla
Poet's Daughter.
 
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Voted For: Valor

Valor- Ahhh Nice imagery and emotion good shit ish. I liked the concept most def. THe vocab was good. But the Concepts was just decent w/ the emotion and the Imagery. Good.

VS

Nothing (Vick Slate)

I didnt feel he had nothin going on, it was short, had Imagery. The emotion wasn't there.

V/Valor cause Of coming harder with lots of emotion and imagery chea


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Old 07-26-05, 11:38 PM   #10
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O and Yeah..Your down for a rematch valor?............

I beat you once...Wouldnt hurt if we battled again eh?
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Old 07-27-05, 12:13 AM   #11
Triple_N
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From: Queens, NY
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Voted For: Valor



A clearly one-sided battle....Valor your verse was good...nothing spectacualr but u didn't need a monster to take this one...good flow, structure, vocab, imagerythe whoel 9...good shit son

VIck....wtf was u thinking....u barely posted anything....u had nothing in ther eu jus rambled...seems like u didn't care an jus gvae valor the win....I aint even gotta explain this more


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Old 07-27-05, 12:34 AM   #12
Ltizzle
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Voted For: Valor

no contest here...

vick-
you obviously aint try...
shit looks like you whipped it up in a few mins
your flow wasnt bad, but the lyrics could have been a lot bettter...
you didnt really try at all..

valor-
on the other hand, you DID try i think...
your shit was very well thought out, therefore improving your lyrics...
i love the complexity in some of your lines, just enough to add a lil touch to it, but not too much to make it seem fake and forced...
only a few times i have seen that pulled off before...its always too much of too little, props...
good flow on the whole thing, although i found maybe one or two lines that were somewaht stretched...
good lyrics again, i think you had this in the bag before it even started...

v/ valor
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Old 07-27-05, 01:17 AM   #13
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Voted For: Valor

V/Valor due 2 containing everything thats needed to win a topical
Kinda like Vick Slate didnt even try...

this was a waist of Credits...

Vote.....Valor
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