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08-11-04, 11:07 AM | #1 | ||||||
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sum thing i worte
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Baby, remember how you used tell me that you loved my rugged image,
But now we cant communicate, well ya cant go past the line of scrimmage You said that you wanted me, but baby I let you down, and gave ya frown Baby I was so immature, baby if I was a king I’d give up ma crown Just to be with you, babe I would kill just to spend a night out with you Must be n I luv,I never felt this way, I guess in this case my love is true Just tell wat can I do, we chose our separate paths,, that cancel out each otha Trust betrayed , by your click ,cuz sum financial shit, now we sperated foreva But lemme tell you before I’m gone, I wanted you, yo soul baby just you Out of all the girls I would sleep I want you, spend time, puff dimes wit you But sadly the tides of time pushed u out of the way, I dreamed of makin luv To a beautiful blonde, but for now its so long, god gimme or take me above Through you departure, every second was hell, and finally it rings a bell That I should stayed ahead of the game, not play lame, now I’m cursed I wouldn’t mine knowing, that if I don’t get you,tomorrow I get hearsed Well now I tryin tell you how I feel, but you say I cant cause of groups So now I stay home a lot, boardin on fruity loops, slagin n playin hoops But I want you, but if you don’t want me I guess that’s to bad, cause my life Is worthless piece of trash, I struggle to get by, but it would be better by yo side Just wanted tell you, girl your special, I want you back , don’t need money Hopefully you miss me too, at if I’m gone maybe your eyes will get a lil runny Sayin damn that best boy I’ve been with, hje actually gave a fuck about me But ii just wanted you to know that your worth a universe without you honey Yo girl I want you to let me touch your chest and so I can get you heart back Yo body ,your mind, your soul is like greater then Venus, a true art artifact |
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08-11-04, 11:08 AM | #2 | ||||||
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i know its fucked up, but wtv
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08-11-04, 11:18 AM | #3 | ||||||
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08-11-04, 11:46 AM | #4 | ||||||
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wtf
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08-11-04, 12:48 PM | #5 | ||||||
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if i'm wack then dis me,
but no answering will piss me \so fuckingsogft]\so |
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08-11-04, 01:23 PM | #6 | |||||
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its cool just work on flow wordplay you use lots of emotion which is cool if you mix it with some imagination
check my open mic peace |
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08-11-04, 01:25 PM | #7 | ||||
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nice jus elevate a litle
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08-11-04, 01:39 PM | #8 | |||||
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your titles all fucked up
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08-11-04, 01:58 PM | #9 | |||||
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lol i know you can do better
i see ya shit in original
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08-11-04, 02:15 PM | #10 | ||||||
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thanks,i will peep all yuor stuff, and ruff tuff thug your an idiot, i can str8t freestyle better then you when i was 10 and i was shit and you really suck.
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