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10-23-05, 07:23 PM
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The Topical Juggernaut
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
IP: 5E81 7A12
Checkin Polls....................................!
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10-23-05, 07:49 PM
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
IP: 71DB 93E1
Dope drop as usual drama.....................
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10-24-05, 01:34 PM
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Upping this to the very top of the page, maybe get some votes on it too...
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10-24-05, 08:01 PM
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IP: 49FB B804
Voted For: Drama Queen
drama queen- i really liked ur topical, it had a lot of emotion, n the concept wuz good... im likin how it fit the topic of mirrored worlds, the ending made the whole thing a lot deeper, i reread the whole thing after that n certain lines had completely different meanings after knowin wut the endin is... good vocab, maybe a bit excessive tho... overall its still great dilligence- the writin isnt at all bad, but the topical didnt really match the topics, u say "mirrored world" at th end, but that doesnt make it a mirrored world... woulda been better if u'd made it more abstract, witout dates n stuff, n then sed that today's worl mirrors back then, or suttin like that... also would been better if the endin gave meanin to it, like dqs did... basically, if u had read it carefully (which i had) u'd already kno that it wuz civil rights era, cuz of the dates n historical references n stuff... not bad tho v/ drama queen |
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10-25-05, 12:38 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: C3E0 7452
Thanks for the vote...
Uppity Up Up Keep em coming...
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11-12-05, 01:04 AM
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
IP: 2029 97B3
ive seen this verse every where.....................
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11-12-05, 09:35 AM
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This was feedback posted for Diligence
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that was beautiful Dili...... way to hold it down playa...... checkin polls and uppin for my fam, Diligence
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11-13-05, 12:42 PM
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Odi et Amo
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Upping this to the very top of the page so we can get some more votes!
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11-26-05, 12:06 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 258D A773
Upping this once again
Come on people, vote up  I'll return the favor!
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12-13-05, 11:21 AM
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Argh....
I just wanna get this shit closed ASAP
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12-17-05, 03:41 PM
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This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
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pop lotty............................................. ..............
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