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Old 08-05-04, 08:57 AM   #1
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uh here we go now (Yea).

i like it when gurls lean over here and dance/
it makes me feel like pullin down my pance/.
i hope ya feelin me cuz i think im gonna get my chance/.
i hope ya likin me cuz i think im ready/
its my first time so i hope yer nice and steady/

uh part 2 here we go now.

im tryin to send a message to you/
i hope ya gettin it, cuz you aint no foo/.
i realy do like it when you shake yer ass/
i hope you dont reply and say you pass/.
if you do say that then ill be shut down/
and ill be home with a frown/
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Old 08-05-04, 09:03 AM   #2
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lil 2 simple n short but good drop...work on structure,wordplay n vocab holla back
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Old 08-05-04, 09:06 AM   #3
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yeah but wut would i kno i got the same prob
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Old 08-05-04, 09:09 AM   #4
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yo dawg nice drop u shud make it longa man make it a real song dawg good topic but work on vocab like Killa sed , uh god drop doe dawg keep postin n ill holla
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Old 08-06-04, 03:09 AM   #5
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ya plan on that i recorded it man but it needs to be longer
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Old 08-06-04, 03:11 AM   #6
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if you have heard lean back by fat joe thats the beat im using for it
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Old 08-06-04, 03:29 AM   #7
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thanks yall im starting to fegure out how to spit good rhymes my home boy on msn told me that i keep changing the story and that and i am starting to rap with a good style now i think ill have some good audio songs when i fiegure out how to get them on the soundclickt thingy
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