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Old 12-21-03, 07:21 PM   #1
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replied to: Thrust, Smokajoka666, and Sand

They say that two wrongs don't make a right, problem is...
If I did my math correctly, two negatives equal postitives
But check it...or dot it off, circle whatever the hell you want
Your worse nightmare like living in the Summer of Sam's Son
Yet Samson weilding power, the courage to stop him not there
Bring me Yogi and Booboo, and this already more than you'll bear
They say That Im just nothing, rap is definately not my calling
Might be true, but I'd rather be nothing, than trying to be anything
Fuck what you heard, I may be the hottest when I speak
Because they listen to my words, exposing to 6 feet deep
bringing back the dead, my rhymes are thrilling your colors
Dark Clouds over me, I guess Im predicting rain for tomorrow
I might not be the best that ever did it, because I ain't do shit yet
I'm like rap's virgin, yet your raps homo, words out the closet.
Fuck it...

You can try to understand, but you have another level to learn
You cry and you yearn, But you can't even settle your terms
My agreement is relievement for those who can't speak themselves
We all have a gold mine in our heart...so why don't you find your wealth?
Most find to be millionaires, others hit the minor Jackpot
Others priceless in their mouth, like dogs in the sandlots
Fuck this shit...
Im done bragging...I'm too humble.
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Old 12-21-03, 10:54 PM   #2
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great wordplay but im not sure if the message is asclear as skill
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Old 12-21-03, 11:45 PM   #3
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nice drop, I gotta say. Maybe this does deserve a reply........
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Old 12-22-03, 01:03 AM   #4
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yeah...it was tight..but you were rapping in circles..meaning that..WE DIDNT KNOW WHAT THE HELL YOU WAS TALKING ABOUT..but it had some good lines..I give it a 7/10..peace out..
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Old 12-22-03, 01:18 AM   #5
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I dont know why this is being slept on... I liked the wordplay, and the use of vocab. I liked the topic. Maybe work on intensity, not like you didnt have it. But I feel you can never have enough of that in a flow. You a Vet, so you know that. Some of your lines really jumped out and grabbed my attention. This was a good piece, always enjoy readin ya flows... Nice drop hommie...
STOP SLEEPING ON THIS EVERYONE...

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Old 12-22-03, 09:48 AM   #6
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I appreciate the reply, but I was just keystylin, puttin everything out one by oone, didn't take time at all
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Old 12-22-03, 10:58 AM   #7
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..I don't know what all the 'fess' is about???
I thought this was a decent piece..to be a key style? than it's an excellent piece..your content did lacka little..but,what more can you expect from a keystyle??..it's pretty Dope..
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Old 12-22-03, 01:07 PM   #8
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I get more airplay then proffessional blow-jobs
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